Money and Media dominate modern day politics " how far do you agree?

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“Money and Media dominate modern day politics” – how far do you agree?

It is widely claimed that the media, and the money available to dominate it, has a much wider grasp over the voting public than manifesto or policy. The majority of the worlds media sources hold some sort of partisan alignment, and its hold on the public means this bias is passed on to the electorate. How much it influences the electorate however, is different amongst many theories. The manipulative theory suggests that the media submerges real news in meaningless trivia in order to benefit itself. An example of this is Rupert Murdoch’s support of Labour only once they’d dropped clause 4 of the constitution. The Hegemonic theory agrees with the accusation of the biased nature of the media but argues that it is less calculating. Any political stance it holds is the genuine opinion of the papers or broadcasters, and its publicising of these views is not in an attempt to manipulate the electorate. The pluralist theory argues that the customers choose the media, not the other way around, and their political views are reflected by their choice of newspaper or broadcaster, not changed by it. Though these theories have different ideas on the motives of the media, they all essentially say the same thing, the hard truth that the media is biased, and that its opinions are carried by its consumers. Another undeniable fact is that the political groups with the most money have the greatest chance of gaining the favourability of the media.

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Television has led the nature of elections, but more so in America than Britain due to the differing regulations relating to media, and the different motives that broadcasters have across the Atlantic. Firstly, the US doesn’t have a publicly funded broadcaster, and all broadcasting channels have a profit-driven business plan. They will therefore only show the most popular candidates in bite size chunks, not allowing for in depth and democratic coverage. Reports suggest that in the 2008 campaign, Barac Obama’s images were larger, more colourful, and positive than the ones of John McCain. This also provokes voting behaviour based ...

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The political vocabulary used in this essay is excellent. Saying "they switched allegiance", for example, is better than saying "they decided to change their minds" because "allegiance" is often used as a word meaning support for a political party, and it shows better understanding than just using general phrases. The spelling, grammar and punctuation are all excellent, meaning that the examiner can focus on giving the student marks for knowledge and analysis rather than working out what they are trying to say.

The evidence used in this essay is excellent. The student uses a lot of statistics, such as "spending about $10 per vote he gained". This shows that the student understands that the amount Obama raised was huge and unprecedented, which helps to answer the question. It is good that they use Obama as a recent example as it shows they stay up-to-date with politics, but any essay on money in US politics would benefit from mentioning that Obama raised it largely over the Internet, as that was so new and innovative. The student also uses lots of facts, such as quoting names like "Ross Perot" and groups like "PACs", which is good as it shows that the student isn't just understanding that millionaire candidates exist but can prove it with factual knowledge. The student could improve this by using the full title rather than the abbreviation, so in this case "Political Action Committees" rather than just "PACs", because it would prove that the student knows the full meaning of the term. After you've used it in full once, it's fine to abbreviate again. This student then goes on to explain why the facts they have used are significant or insignificant: "This seems less of a ceiling..." shows that they have the understanding to say what the statistic seems to show, rather than just rhyming off lists of figures they have learnt. The conclusion to the essay is very good as it challenges established theories, which shows that the student has the understanding to make up their own mind. However, it is still perfectly fine to agree with the established theories you have learnt, as long as you can say why, because it still shows a considered judgement.

The student answers the question very well by referring to both of the ideas introduced in the question - money and the media - which is good as it shows that they have enough knowledge to answer the question. The student also refers to theories such as the "hegemonic theory" of the media, which shows that they can respond well to the idea in the question by adding their own knowledge of theories. In the introduction, they only talk about money when discussing how it affects the media, when they should mention it as a separate point - money doesn't just affect the media, it also affects campaigns in its own right. They go on to do this in the essay itself, but if they did it in the introduction, it would show the examiner right away that they can organise their knowledge.