Discuss the biological approach to psychopathology
The biological model assumes that all mental disorders are caused by physical factors – like illnesses. Such illnesses may be caused by one of four possible factors: genes, biochemistry, neuroanatomy and viral infection - biochemistry referring to hormones and neuroanatomy referring to brain structure.
According to this approach, mental illness can be the result of genetic inheritance, and so are passed on from parent to child. Many of the genes responsible for abnormal behaviours are the product of evolutionary adaptations in our ancestors, despite the fact that these traits are no longer useful. For example, psychologists believe ‘stress genes’ evolved in order to help our ancestors in times of danger and provide them with the ‘fight or flight’ response which is no longer as useful in our technological world.
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Quality of writing
The Quality of Written Communication (QWC) here is very good. All difficult terminology is spelt and applied correctly, all grammar is accurate and there are no punctuation issues to be found. This is an good example of a candidate who has clearly taken time to ensure the clarity of their written expression by re-reading and spell-checking everything they wrote, in order to make the transmission of the information - quite complex information, for anyone to have to read - far more accessible due to the clear and accurate QWC.
Level of analysis
The Level of Analysis here is very good. The candidate realises a number of difficulties as well as success which biological ideas about psychopathy, citing empirical evidence that helps support and refute certain theories and treatment, all the while applying specialist terminology like "certain genes may lead to abnormal biochemistry and/or abnormal neuroanatomy" and does well to recognise a number of contributory factors to biological psychopathy, such as evolutionary factors. Where the candidate could improve is to, perhaps, mention how biological intervention can induce psychopathy, e.g. neuro-surgery that fails to cure but instead makes a problem worse, or perhaps an accident of the ilk of Phineas Gage, where a man who was always considered very normal became a psychopath after a large pole was blown through his left cheek, through his right frontal lobe and out of the top of his head after accidentally placing the pole on a landmine. How did this intervention change Gage's biology and ultimately induce psychopathy? Not mentioning this does not greatly hinder the answer, but it would aid the candidate by giving them a different biological cause of psychopathy to discuss, helping to vary their answer a bit more.
Response to question
This candidate demonstrates an excellent knowledge of the biological approach and, unlike so many other essays, does not fall foul to forgetting to tie the theory to the question. This candidate has very succinctly describe the beliefs of the biological approach in conjunction with the treatment of certain psychopathic disorders. There is a good use of the appropriate terminology required and the argument is balanced. The introductory paragraph is very well-written and nicely helms the direction of the essay by introducing the psychopathic disorder classifications and how biology affects behaviour, allowing the rest of the essay to flow naturally into a very well-augmented essay.