Ethics behind selective breeding of animals
Selective breeding, also known as artificial selection involves identifying individuals with the desired characteristics and using them to parent the next generation.
Ethical concerns and benefits of selective breeding
Alongside the potential benefits, selective breeding of animals raises a variety of ethical concerns. There are two main concerns. These are:
Fundamental moral objections against doing something “unnatural” or, specifically to their artificial selection, for example concerns about the consequences of reduced genetic diversity.
As stated above some believe that selective breeding interferes with nature. Selective breeding has produced livestock that gives greater yields. This has given rise to a reliable cheap food source throughout the year. It could considerably raise the standard of living in developing countries where starvation is a prevalent problem.
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Quality of writing
The essay contains a high quality of written communication with correct spelling and grammar and many subject-specific terms which show a good level of understanding. The essay could flow better if certain points were grouped together and an appropriate concluding paragraph was included, recapitulating the argument which the writer feels more strongly about.
Level of analysis
The writer has analysed certain points well, giving examples and writing to argue both sides of the argument throughout the essay, for example by giving the specific evidence of ‘mastitis’ when mentioning the possible arguments animal rights campaigners may use to shun selective breeding in cattle. However a few points could do with further explanation, or not being mentioned at all, particularly the newly introduced ideas in the final paragraph relating to who should decide whether artificial selection should take place. Little is offered by the writer to explain why people may believe that politicians should make the decisions and it may have been more judicious to include these points earlier on in the essay.
Response to question
Overall the candidate has explored the various arguments for and against selective breeding well, although some points could be developed further and cohesion could be improved by organising these arguments more logically. They have given examples for some points and it would be beneficial to replicate this throughout the essay. In addition, the conclusion could be made clearer by reiterating and supporting a previously mentioned point rather than introducing new questions.