Ozone chemistry speech. Today, I am here to inform you that an ozone hole has been detected over Antarctica and the concentration of ozone will continue to decrease across the globe if the emission of ODCs, such as CFCs, does not reduce.

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Marlene Hu

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(Year 2004- Channel 7 news, slide 1)

Breaking news in LA today is that the new movie premier The Day After Tomorrow is actually based on a true event that happened in 1986 at an international conference on climate change. However, it was not global warming leading into an ice age that was discussed, but (slide 2) the discovery of the ozone hole that biologically dangerous ultraviolet (UV) radiation cannot be completely absorbed to preserve the life forms on Earth. Thankfully, unlike the movie, 24 countries agreed to abide to the Montreal Protocol on substances that deplete the ozone layer, which aimed to gradually phase out all ozone-destroying chemicals, ODCs for short. Although measures have been taken, the ozone layer will not recover until the middle of this century as most ODCs have a lifetime of 20 to 100 years. Here coming up, is an extract from a video of the conference.

(Year 1986, slide 3)

Ladies and gentlemen, I am Professor Rowland. Today, I am here to inform you that an ozone hole has been detected over Antarctica and the concentration of ozone will continue to decrease across the globe if the emission of ODCs, such as CFCs, does not reduce.

USA: The CFCs’ industry is worth 8 billion dollars per year.

I understand. The chemical is ideal for many purposes as it is used as a solvent and cleaning agent in the electronic industry, a non-toxic propellant in aerosol cans, a refrigerant and is a blowing agent in producing Styrofoam and other plastics. However, CFCs account for 80% of ozone depletion so if we don’t act soon, our children and grandchildren will have to pay the price.

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USA: And who's going to pay the price if we abide to this Montreal Protocol you are suggesting? It would cost the world's economy hundreds of billions of dollars.

With all due respect, Mr. Vice President, the cost of doing nothing could be even higher. Our climate is fragile.

USA: Professor Rowland, our economy is every bit as fragile as the environment. Perhaps you should keep that in mind before making sensationalist claims.

Well, the ozone hole over Antarctica covers an area of approximately 10 million square kilometres. Some people might call that pretty sensational. Please ladies and gentlemen, ...

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All punctuation, grammar and spelling are done to a very high level. The format of the essay is easy to read with clear paragraphing and relation to the powerpoint slides used in the talk.

This essay is presented in a talk format to explain the impact of cfcs on the ozone layer. The candidate has researched the topic well and explains the chemical reactions caused in the depletion of ozone to a very accurate level and in scientific terms discusses the impact this is having on the earth. The essay is very easy to follow and understand even if you did not have any prior chemistry knowledge.

A very high detailed and quality scientific essay. The candidate is able to talk about chemistry in a convincing and knowledgeable way that I would only expect of the top A level candidates that have a very good understanding of the subject.

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All punctuation, grammar and spelling are done to a very high level as there are no sentences which are hard to read. The format of the essay is easy to read with clear paragraphing and relation to the powerpoint slides used in the talk.

This essay is presented in a talk format to explain the impact of cfcs on the ozone layer. This is good in this instance, because the candidate was required to do a talk in the form of a powerpoint. The candidate has researched the topic well and this shows from the amount of data and range of sources evident in the text, and explains the chemical reactions caused in the depletion of ozone to a very accurate level and in scientific terms discusses the impact this is having on the earth. The essay is very easy to follow due to the thorough explanation of each equation and the impact this has and what it leads to, and understand even if you did not have any prior chemistry knowledge. The conclusion at the end is only hinted at, but this is adequate in this instance because this is a talk, and the build up of points leads to the conclusion in itself which explains the development of the ozone hole.

A very high detailed and quality scientific essay. The candidate includes a range of scientific equations that explain how CFCS and other substances destroy the ozone layer perfectly, and is able to discuss in chemical terms what impact this will be having on the ozone layer in the form of a powerpoint which not many candidates of this level would be able to do. The candidate is able to talk about chemistry in a convincing and knowledgeable way through the use of complex chemistry and good communication skills that I would only expect of the top A level candidates that have a very good understanding of the subject. All equations are correct.