Kim Sills 12F Biology
The Use and Operation of the Light and Electron Microscope
Light microscopes were first used in the seventeenth century, famously by the scientist Robert Hooke; the man that first named ‘cells’. It was not until the nineteenth century however that microscopy became popular. Before this time, the lenses had not been of high enough quality to view images clearly, in the early nineteenth century improvements were made and the identification of cell structures began.
Problems with resolution then became apparent; a wave length shorter than light needed to be used in order to improve the clarity of image produced; Electron microscopes were developed as a solution; both Ultraviolet light and X-rays have shorter wave lengths but it was found that these were extremely difficult to focus. Electrons, however, are negatively charged particles; this gives the advantage of being able to focus them easily, by use of electromagnets. These electromagnets act in exactly the same way as a lens would on a Light Microscope.
How light microscopes work
In a compound light microscope; a light source is located underneath the stage. The light goes through a condenser lens and through the specimen, the resulting light is then passed through two more lenses, both used to magnify the image and focus towards the ocular. The lenses used indicate the resulting magnification of the specimen. Lenses are used as these refract the light, and although the image is inversed, the image is much larger, as is illustrated below.
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This piece of work is well written and the layout works well, the information is clear and the essay is easy to follow as the candidate first discusses one type of microscope, then the other and then compares the two rather than jumping from one to the other and back again. In addition to this, the candidate has used appropriate terminology and there are no grammatical or spelling mistakes.
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