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Alone.

Karen and her friends were sitting in the local park discussing their futures, as one of them was in mid sentence a rather nice lad walked past. 

“Mm not bad I’d say 9, if he cuts his hair a little.” Nicki said whilst drooling over a lad passing.

“9 are you crazy, more like 10 he’s hot,” proclaimed Karen.

“ You two are so sad,” Steph bitched.

“Oh shut up” screamed Lisa.

“ I’m going to talk to him,” Karen said very full of her self.

        She got up and started walking towards the lad who looked as if he was Italian, he had dark brown hair and big brown eyes he had the facial structures of Brad Pitt but the voice of an Italian version of the rapper LL Cool J, he was wearing a stylish pair of jeans and jumper with a rather peculiar symbol attached to a necklace. Karen on the other hand was medium height, athletic build and very argumentative when it comes to her personal life, she is the kind of person you’d find on the ‘Jerry Springer Show’

       The lad was sitting on the next bench from the girls. Karen approached the lad as though she had known him forever.

“Well hello.” said Karen.

“Um, hi.” he replied.

“So where are you from.” asked Karen.

“Italy I’ve just moved down here and thought I’d take a walk and do a little sight seeing.”

“On your own.”

“I don’t really know any one yet.”

“Ok, so what’s your name?”  

“Andrew, you?”

“Karen”.

       They talked for a while and arranged to meet each other later, said their good byes and went in opposite directions. Karen went towards her friends and Andrew went towards his grandmother who was sitting in the car at the end of the park.

“So, spill”

“ Yeh come-on, details!” The girls snapped.

“Well I got his number if that’s what you wanted to know”

 replied Karen with a cheeky grin on her face.

“Oooooooooo, That it!” Steph said in a nasty tone.

“ No we have arranged to meet later, which reminds me I gotta change.” Karen said whilst grabbing her bag.

“ I’ll give ya a bell later ok!”

           After a minute or so the rest of the girls went home. Karen went home and freshened up a little, put on the smallest top and skirt she owned, it wasn’t far off 9:30 and the night was so romantic the sky full of stars and not a soul in sight.

          Karen walked through the town and towards the park where she was meeting Andrew, she looked at the swings and saw him, he turned, caught a glimpse of Karen and smiled. They said their hello’s and went for a nice romantic walk.

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       They sat under an old oak tree on the south side of the park looking up at the stars, they were talking about their futures and what they wanted in life, when suddenly an old women emerged from behind an other tree, screaming some foreign language,

“Weder sonefrad burken!” she mumbled.

“Oh my God!” Karen screamed a meter up in the air.

       The old lady just looked at Karen and Andrew like she was a stray dog and they were food, she had an old walking stick with ‘Italian blood’ in small print on ...

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