Clean Cut Misfit.

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Nathan Davenport

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CLEAN CUT MISFIT

“Jason, it’s for you!” called Mrs Davis from downstairs. Jason opened an eye. He groaned. Mrs Davis walked up the stairs with the cordless telephone in her hand. Jason opened the other eye. Mrs Davis opened Jason’s bedroom, only to find him lying on the floor in a heap. She looked up, and rolled her eyes at Jason’s blue curtains, closed.

Jason had fallen out of bed, and was lying on the floor, on top of his quilt.

“Come on, get up!” Mrs Davis was stood above Jason like a giant. She reached down and handed him the phone. Jason took the phone from his mother, and, still half asleep, put it to his ear.

“Hello?”

“Dude, you have to come out today!” It was David, Jason’s best friend. He seemed really excited about something.

“What’s so special about today? Aren’t we having a band practise?” Jason was in a band with David, and another one of his friends, Jim. Jim didn’t go to their school, but David and Jim were friends at primary school and had kept in touch. In their band, Jason played the drums, David played guitar, and Jim played bass guitar and sang. They were hopeless, but they had big plans and ambitions. They had a practise every Saturday in Jason’s garage, where his drum kit was kept.

“No, go to Tesco,” Jason found this a little bit odd.

“Why Tesco?” he asked, completely surprised.

“”We need to buy some milk for Jim’s mum!” replied David. “It’s a special mission! Hurry up!”

Jason thought he heard laughter in the background, but he realised that he was still half asleep and assumed that he had dreamed it. He ignored it.

After arguing about David having woken Jason up too early, they agreed to meet at Tesco at eleven O’ clock. Jason would ask his father to give him a lift.

Jason hung up, got up off the floor, and stood up, his tall, slim frame casting along shadow across his darkened bedroom. His long, dark brown hair fell across his face and over his eyes. He brushed it away and went to get a shower.

Ten minutes later, he got out and dried himself off. He trudged into his bedroom – the curtains still shut – and opened his wardrobe. He chose his new red No Fear T-shirt, and his navy blue Fubu jeans, got dressed, pulled on his black beanie hat, adjusted his lip ring, and went downstairs to have a quick breakfast.

“Dad, will you take me to Tesco for eleven?” asked Jason, and his eyebrows were raised.

“Sure.” That was easy, thought Jason to himself. He went to pour himself some cereal, and then sat down to eat it.

Jason finished his breakfast and went upstairs to brush his teeth. After he had finished, he lumbered into his room, and then realised that he was in a rush. He grabbed his bag, fumbled with zip, and when he had finally won his bat, he stuffed his black hoodie, his mobile phone, and his personal CD player into it, slipped on his comfy old black Airwalk shoes, and charged downstairs, urging his father to hurry up.

They set off soon after Jason’s, erm…subtle request. Jason turned on his CD player, and put the earpieces to his ears. Papa Roach’s “Broken Home” blasted out from them at a ridiculous volume, and Jason jerked the pieces away rapidly. He turned the volume down, and replaced the earpieces, bouncing to the music.

As the last bars of “Binge” rang out, they arrived at Tesco, and Jason got out of the car. His father rolled down the front window and beckoned to him. He told Jason to call him to let him know what was going on later on. Jason agreed and waved goodbye to his father.

Jason walked straight into Tesco, and being his ever-so-slightly-paranoid self, he instantly called David from his mobile phone. Sam, another, particularly large and intimidating, friend, answered the phone:

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“Hey dude, we’re Aisle Seven,” he shouted, in his big, deep booming, and increasingly annoying voice. “Where are you?”

“I’ve only just got here,” retorted Jason, slightly irritated. “Not everyone’s parents are like a taxi service.”

“Whatever, dude.” Sam as good ignored this. “Go to the milk aisle, we’ll meet you there,”

Jason headed towards the milk aisle, on his immediate left. He passed Aisle Seven on his way there, but it was empty. Jason was puzzled.

“Remind me, once again, why we’re here,” he insisted. “I’m confused.” More laughter, he thought. He shrugged it off, though.

Sam reassured Jason ...

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