In the story “Lamb to the Slaughter” the murder is swift but deadly and it all stems from the husband telling his wife that he was going to leave her. After this she first continues to do what she would normally do. She went out of the room to make the dinner and down to the freezer to get the leg of lamb that they would be having and even though she was not as content as she would normally have been in normal circumstances she was still relatively fine until her husband snapped once more at her saying “for Gods sake don’t make dinner for me I’m going out”. After this Mary Maloney simply walked up behind him and with a single skull crushing blow crashed the frozen leg of lamb directly to the back of his head, “At that point Mary Maloney simply walked up behind him and without any pause she swung the big frozen leg of lamb high in the air and brought it down as hard as she could on the back of his head”. In this short story the murder was not premeditated in that she did not plan even for more than a singular minute to kill her husband. However, once her husband had broken this earth shattering news to his wife and proceeded to become verbally hostile towards her she could not take it any more and killed him. This is what is known as a crime of passion because it is all in the spur of the moment and her only motive for committing such a heinous crime was fear, fear of losing her husband, fear of being an only mother and fear of losing financial security was the only thing driving her to kill. She felt this fear with a true passion that it gripped her with such force that any rationality she had was overshadowed by it. I believe that the reason that she does not want to be caught for this crime is mainly her unborn child, because in her mind she has already lost her husband and she would do anything to stop herself from losing the baby. Maybe even kill again and this is why she goes to such elaborate lengths to dispose of the evidence, cooking the lamb, and then convincing the police to eat it “Please, she begged, please eat it”. After finding out that she is pregnant and a good house wife, then finding out that her husband is going to leave at such a bad time I feel that is inevitable that the reader will feel some degree of sympathy for her.
The murder in the novel “The Speckled Band” is very different to the murder in “Lamb to the Slaughter”. This is because, as I said earlier, the murder in the short story was fast and swift whereas the murder in this tale was one of extreme longevity. This is because it takes an extremely long time to engineer all of the specific details that would lead to the death of any of the doctor’s potential victims, the thing that the doctor had to do, the things that ultimately lead to Holmes solving the case, where the ventilator shaft that the snake that he had brought from Africa some years ago would crawl down, the fake bell pull for the snake to return and the bed being bolted to the floor would all take a long time. So the murder was not swift but finely planned and developed. The events of the first murder, Julia Stoner, are the same as the attempts of the murder on Helen Stoner. These are, the vicious Doctor would release the snake down the ventilator shaft it would crawl down the fake bell pull, then on to the bolted bed and on to the victim. It may not successfully bite the bed’s occupant the first time but eventually it would poison the person and kill them almost instantaneously. This was worked out impressively by the sleuth Sherlock Holmes. The murder its self is also almost the complete parallel of the first short story in that the murder is extremely complex whereas in “Lamb to the Slaughter” it was a spur of the moment killing. In this narrative the only motive for the murder and attempted murder of the two Stoner sisters was merely to save him money. This is because, as we are told in the story, if any of the two sisters were to get married they would be allotted a share of the family fortune per year, “a certain annual sum should be allowed to each of us in the event of our marriage” and if this were to happen the Doctor would be left with a meager amount of cash. The Doctor would not have to be so concerned if it were not for the families ancestors who had squandered the families wealth, “four successive heirs were of a dissolute and wasteful disposition, and the family ruin was eventually completed by a gambler” this is the reason that the family was left with such a bare amount. The motive for this murder is extremely diverse from the motive in “Lamb to the Slaughter” because in “Lamb to the Slaughter” the misdemeanor is one of passion. It was done because of a shocking piece of news but in this narrative the motive is for something as cruel and heartless as money. Another difference in the two stories is that in the first short story you are made to feel some kind of sympathy with her, as I have already said. On the contrary to this you have this narrative which does not make you have any good feelings for the Doctor because he comes across as being cold and stern and generally disagreeable, and when he dies you get the feeling that he has got what he deserves. Even Sherlock Holmes says at the end of the tale that the fact that he is directly responsible for his death will not cause him any sleepless nights, “In this way I am no doubt indirectly responsible for Dr Grimesby Roylott’s death, and I cannot say that it is likely to weigh very heavily upon my conscience”.
In the short story “Lamb to the slaughter” the setting is mainly the living room of the Maloney House and this is presented as being extremely homely, the words that are used by Roald Dahl are very good at creating a atmosphere that makes the reader feel as if the this is a very blissful home, the exact words used are “The room was warm and clean, the curtains drawn, the two table lamps alight – hers and the one by the empty chair opposite. On the sideboard behind her, two tall glasses, soda water, whisky. Fresh ice cubes in the Thermos Bucket”. All of this is done to create a warm, cosy and inviting environment which adds to the shock when something so dramatical occurs. The victim in the short story was the husband Mr. Maloney. You were not made to feel much sympathy for this victim because of the situation that he is going to leave her in. The reader is given a perception of a warm and homely atmosphere where a loving wife waits attentively for her husband. This perception changes when the husband’s plans become clear to the reader. He tells her of how he going to leave her and the warm feeling disappear to be replaced by those of shock, pity and a sense of the husband getting just what he deserves. This is akin to the way the reader is made to feel in the narrative ‘The Speckled Band’ about Dr Roylott.
The narrative “The Speckled Band” has an extremely diverse setting from the one that was created in “Lamb to the Slaughter”. The main places that all of the incidents take place are in the manor house of Stoke Moran. The setting of this house is supposed to give the reader get a sense of apprehension and the feeling that an important event will take place there. The key things that do this are, the shape of the old house “a high central portion, and two curving wings like the claws of a crab”. The comparison to a crab creates a feeling that the house is alive which is a popular theme in many a horror story also the crab does not have very positive connotations because they are seen as being angry snapping creatures. Also you are told that “the windows were broken, blocked with wooden boards” this quote creates a sense of foreboding danger and that the house is somewhat unsafe. We are also told that there is a Baboon and Cheetah stalking around the grounds, “and he has at this moment a cheetah and a baboon which wonder liberally over his grounds”. This can be seen as a red herring because once the reader finds this out he/she is led to believe that these creatures have something to do with the deaths in the tale. The atmosphere that the house brings with it is one of terror and misery; this is used to create a great sensation of anxiety. All of the factors that I have established above, like the creatures roaming over the grounds, create a great feeling of evil and uncertainty about the grounds.
In a “Lamb to the Slaughter” the detectives are obviously not as qualified, experienced or as skillful as the two detectives in “The Speckled Band”, Dr Watson and Sherlock Holmes, I believe this because in “Lamb to the Slaughter” the detectives do not do a crucial thing that the very capable detectives do in “The Speckled Band” the key thing that they do not do is actually solve the crime/murder. Also in a “Lamb to the Slaughter” the detectives seem to be overly attached to the murderer, Mary Maloney, so they do not even consider that she could be a potential suspect. As well as this the detectives in this short story come across as being incompetent, this is because they do plenty of things that competent detectives would not do. For instance, the foremost thing that the detectives do wrong is to eat the murder weapon, the leg of lamb, “Why don’t you eat up that lamb that’s in the oven…she wants us to finish it be doing her a favor”. Another thing that the detectives do is to accept a drink off of Mary, which is in a way accepting a drink from the murder. The detectives in this short story can be considered as being exceedingly inept at doing anything successfully to solve the crime. There are moments in the story that prove this. One of these moments are when all of the officers are in the kitchen eating the lamb, which was used to kill her husband, and all talking about where the murder weapon could be, “personally, I think that it’s right here on the premises, probably right under our very nose. What do you think Jack?” and all of this was said at the same time as the detectives where eating the murder weapon! I think that all of the detective’s lack of ability is ultimately what leads to Mary Maloney getting away with murder.
On the contrary to a “Lamb to the Slaughter” you have the extremely competent detectives that are in the novel “The Speckled Band” who despite a range of obstacles that stood in the way, Dr Roylott, the wild animals and the difficult clues, manage to solve a complex and perplexing murder and at the same time stop another murder from taking place and killing the murderer. The fact that the two detectives overcome any hurdles in their way proves that the two of them are far superior to the two in a “Lamb to the Slaughter”. I believe that this is a crucial difference in the two stories because they are murder stories and as we all know two things make up a murder story and these are the murder its self and the detectives who have the ever demanding task of solving it. The way in which the main detective, Sherlock Holmes solves the crime, unlike the detectives in “Lamb to the Slaughter”, is that he looks at the surrounding and all events for clues to who may have perpetrated the crime and why and how they might have done it. The clues that we are given in this novel, the ones that Sherlock Holmes used to solve the crime, are given to him in the same order as I will place it below. The first clue they get is that the doctor had already killed a man and this shows that he has got a temper and is not inhibited about using it, “he beat his native butler to death”, the next clue that we get is that if any of the doctors daughter were to marry the doctor would have to give them an annual sum of money leaving him with a lot less money and the fact the first daughter was going to marry when she was killed was a big clue, “a provision that a certain annual sum should be allowed to each of us in the event of our marriage”. The next clue that was given to both the reader and the detectives is that the doctor collects African animals; “he has at this moment a cheetah and a baboon”. Then the detectives are not told any more clues but they see them for them selves. The next bunch of clues that they get all come at once when they are in Julia Stoner’s room because they see that the bed is bolted to the floor to prevent it from going anywhere else, also they discover a bell pull that does not work so is referred to as a “rope”, then they discover the ventilator that goes in to the doctors room and then they see that the doctors chair in his room was well used to being stood upon. The detective, I say detective not detectives because it is only Holmes who picks up on the clues not Watson, in this story picks up on all of the clues that are left whereas the detectives in “Lamb to the Slaughter” did not even get one clue as to who has committed the crime. I feel that the detective’s ability far outreaches the ability of the detectives in the short story and I think that Sherlock Holms is an exceedingly talented detective. Using the clues that we are given in the novel I did conclude that the murderer was the doctor and that the murder weapon in this case was some kind of African snake. At this point I think that it is good to point out that another difference between the two stories is that “Lamb to the Story” is a murder story where from the point of the murder you know that that the murderer was his wife, however, in “The Speckled Band” you are given clues to see if you can work it out.
In “Lamb to the Slaughter” I have already said how incompetent the detectives were so as a result of this the woman, Mary Maloney, actually gets away with the murder because the detectives do not have any evidence to use if they did work it out to convict her of anything, due to them eating the murder weapon. I think that this twist of the murderer getting away with it was very creative because in standard murder tales the detective will always solve the mystery and save the day but this one is quite the opposite to this so I do like the twist in this story. I am also impressed with the particular twist used in this story and feel some respect for Mary Maloney. As I just mentioned in a murder story there is normally a ‘flash’ detective who is renowned for solving many a perplexing crime. Nevertheless in this story Roald Dahl has written the detectives to be almost comical and incredibly incompetent at there job and this is very odd in a murder story.
The complete opposite of “Lamb to the Slaughter” is “The Speckled Band”. This is because the murder in the short story got away with the murder completely unscathed by the law and the “The Speckled Band” the murder was not only discovered but was also killed, indivertibly, by the detective, Sherlock Holmes. This means that in one way the two stories are similar in that this also is not what normally happens in a murder mystery because in “The Speckled Band” the murder gets killed in the end whereas in a normal murder mystery the murderer is caught and is brought to justice. I do not like the end of “The Speckled Band” probably because, as I already said, I had worked out most of the mystery so it was not a surprising end. However I can see how it could be seen as being a surprising end to the story because there was a couple of red herrings that might have led to the reader suspecting various outcomes, for example we are told the there are a large number of gypsies on the grounds and that could have misled the reader in to suspecting them. Also the animals that roam around the grounds are a red herring because even though they have nothing to do with the murder they can also mislead the reader into thinking that they are relevant to the storyline. This is another way in which the stories differ because “The Speckled Band” does contain some misleading points whereas “Lamb to the Slaughter” does not.
In “Lamb to the Slaughter” I do not think that there are many moments that I found very exciting, however, there was one point in which I was a little intrigued and that was when Mary Maloney was behind her husband and was about to bring the frozen leg of lamb crashing down to the back of his skull. “At that point Mary Maloney simply walked up behind him and without any pause she swung the big frozen leg of lamb high in the air and brought it down as hard as she could on the back of his head”. This part did make me want to carry on reading the story because I needed to find out if he died or if he got up. Then following the murder I was intrigued to discover if she got away with it. This was very well done by the author because it did all of these thing to make the reader want to continue to read the story. Another exciting incident that was in this short story was when her husband was going to tell her something, “Go on, he said, sit down”, “listen…I’ve got something to tell you”, this part made me want to know what it was he wanted to tell her, you already knew it was bad news because of the way he was when he came in. The reader felt a need to know what his revelation was going to be.
In “The Speckled Band” there are lots of points that I found quite exciting, I think I found this one more exciting then the other story because it had better effects of building up the tension in a particular room/place. The best portrayal of this in “The Speckled Band” was when the point where two detectives where waiting in complete darkness for the murder to occur, “I could not hear a sound, not even the drawing of breath and yet I knew my companion sat…within a few feet of me” this part went on to describe the sounds of the cheetah and the nervous tension of the detectives. This was the moment that really made me want to continue to read because when the author has gone to such length to describe a moment you know that something will happen to justify the ‘build up’. Another part that did this was when Dr Watson saw the baboon and was sorely afraid, “when out from a clump of laurel bushes there darted what seemed to be a hideously distorted child”, this also made me want to read further because at this point you do not know whether this creature will attack Holmes and Watson. This novel differs in this way also because as I said “The Speckled Band” had a lot of points that were exciting and “Lamb to the Slaughter” did not have many at all.
There is an obvious difference between the stories in that “The Speckled Band” was written in Victorian times and “Lamb to the Slaughter” was written in the 1950’s. You can tell that “The Speckled Band” was written in the Victorian times because there are words used that would not be used in a more modern book. For example, it uses the words “Intimate friend” in those time these words did not have a lot of bad connotations however in modern times it has very strong connotations and it also uses the word “Ejaculation” this words also has bad connotations in the modern era. You can also tell that it is set in Victorian times because there are still manor houses and cars like dog carts and this is only individual to this time. There are also ways in which you can tell that “Lamb to the Slaughter” is set in the 1950’s because the houses that they live in are modern and typical to that time. Also you can tell that there is a big time difference because in “The Speckled Band” when there is trouble she can only go to one person whereas in “Lamb to the Slaughter” when there is trouble an entire police squad came round to help. In both of the stories there are no female detectives. This does not surprise me because they have never been many females in the police force and even today there are many more men than women in the police force.
After looking at the two stories I have decided that I like the “The Speckled Band” the most. This is because there are many more exciting moments that kept me interested throughout the whole story. Another reason I liked it was because I enjoyed working out clues and slowly solving the crime and the desire to know whether or not I was successful in my deductions. I believe that people will always like to be confused and astounded that is why magic will always be so popular. For all of these reasons people will always want to read a good mystery and the need we have to try to work things out so as not to feel fooled also, our curiosity of wanting to know if we were right, and if not, how it was done.
By
Wezley Siddons