Complete a piece of creative writing, charting the story of the boy with the birthmark, until his death on the island. You may wish to start how and why he was evacuated, or from the plane crash, or the first time he heard the conch.

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Lord of the Flies

Complete a piece of creative writing, charting the story of the boy with the birthmark, until his death on the island. You may wish to start how and why he was evacuated, or from the plane crash, or the first time he heard the conch.

Tyler scrambled from underneath the large panel of metal, which hung from the remains of the aircraft. He stared around his surroundings, trying to make sense of it all. Rubbing his head, which was covered in grass and mud, he clambered to a clearing in the jungle. A large noise suddenly rung in his ears. Tyler swung around glaring at the tall green trees that towered him. Again, the same ear piercing sound rung through his pale ears. He followed his instincts and found himself walking towards this groaning noise. His walk turned in to a run and in the distance he saw crowds of people, two of whom he distinctively recognised. Panting, he eventually reached the crowd and was greeted by a large, pale, rounded, boy. The fat boy breather deeply into Tyler's fragile face, on one of which side had a mulberry-coloured birthmark. Tyler's deep brown eyes stared at the creature.

"Hello! I'm here to help you! What's your name?" heaved the repulsive creature. Tyler debated whether to answer. This creature somewhat intimated Tyler.

"I'm..," the creature attempted to say, he took a deep breath.

"Piggy," interrupted a voice from behind Tyler. Tyler swung around and his eyes met with bright blue ones.

"Johnny! Thank goodness I found you!" exclaimed Tyler excitedly. He leapt up in the air and stood on his head. Johnny beamed back and joined him and stood on his head too. The loud noise that had once scared Tyler was sounded in his ears once again. Immediately Johnny and Tyler turned to the sandy coloured haired boy who had made the sound, now realising it was a large shell, and obediently listened. There was much commotion going on around Johnny and Tyler. The two boys stood there in complete awe. It struck them. There were no adults. Tyler didn't know how to react. He knew Johnny was screaming with excitement inside from the look on his face. Tyler, however, was slightly frightened. How were they going to survive? Who was going to feed them? Johnny disturbed Tyler's thoughts by jumping on him.
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"We're free Tyler! No grown-ups! We can do what we like!" Said Johnny, ecstatically. Tyler tried to look amazed.

The sandy-coloured haired boy stood up in front of everyone. He looked around for attention. Piggy, standing timidly next to him, attempted to speak to the sandy-coloured haired boy.

"That's why Ralph made a meeting. So we can decide what to do. We've heard names. That's Johnny. These two- they're twins, Sam 'n Eric. Which is Eric-? You? No-you're Sam-"

"I'm Sam-"

"'N I'm Eric"

"We'd better all have names," said the sandy ...

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