Creative Writing : The Encounter

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Creative Writing : The Encounter

By Edward Paradise

Walking up the mountain, a cloudless sky overhead, it was a near perfect day. As my climbing party and I reached the bottom of Mount Savorlia, the highest mountain in the world, I gazed upwards and stared in wonder at the snow-capped peaks, vast forests and steep alpine trials. It appeared that one man alone could not triumph over this mammoth creation of the earth. I was enthralled by this foreign land and I found myself in, isolated from accustomed civilisation I felt as though I was in a different world with surroundings uncharted and valleys undiscovered.

It was pointed out to me, however, that the menacing pitch black clouds known well to these parts were on the horizon and imminent. A strong wind was picking up and beginning to howl out ears. Without giving another thought I commenced my long climb, despite many forceful warnings shouted in my direction. Tiny lashes of rain began to turn the loose dirt below my feet into a sticky mud making the surface slippery.
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After criss-crossing the lower slopes of the mountainside, I realised I hadn't looked at the time in hours. The once light rain had now turned to a thick snow beating down on my exposed face, this was made worst by the driving wind. It was late into the night and conditions like these could mean death.

Having sat down to rest my previous feeling of cold had now changed to one of hunger. To my distress and horror, I discovered wide gaping slash marks in the back of my bag. They seemed to be from some sort ...

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