Critical Commentary on The Arrival of the Bee Box written by Sylvia Plath.

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Critical Commentary on  The Arrival of the Bee Box

        

The arrival of the Bee Box, is a poem written by Sylvia Plath where she the extended metaphor of a bee box to reflect her state of mind and her appearance.  We can see that throughout the poem she does not feel at peace with herself. Her inner turmoil, illustrated by the bees, contrasts with what she shows herself to be, the box. However, to reveal her real feelings and thoughts, and to therefore open the box, means that there is a possibility of attack by its contents, a warning she seems anxious to ignore.

We are immediately introduced to the bee box in the first stanza of the poem. She takes responsibility for the presence of the box as she says that "I ordered this". If we take this bee box to be her appearance, we can see how she has made a conscious effort to hide what she is really feeling. To demonstrate the unequivocal reality of the box she describes it is as being "square as a chair and almost too heavy to lift". Further, the rhyming phrase, "square as a chair", gives aural substance to the box. This implies that now this fake appearance has become a reality for the people around her and she is afraid that she may not be able to change it any longer and to thus show her real self. Plath then tries to illustrate the box to us by the use of metaphors. She states that it could be the "coffin of a midget or a square baby". Both these metaphors are quite grotesque and suggest that she does not like the box, or what she shows herself to be, after all. She soon discards these metaphors however for she can hear a "din in it". This phrase creates a humming sound which reflects the sound made by the bees. This creates contrast between the theme of death which surround the box, or Plath, and the confusion which takes place inside her.

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In stanza two, Sylvia Plath gives us more detail about the bee box. She says that "the box is locked" because its contents are "dangerous", yet the she "can't keep away from it". This suggests that whatever is in her mind, can cause damage to the people around her, but unfortunately she cannot change her ideas. The fact that she has to "live with it overnight" implies that this inner conflict is at all times taking place, even in her dreams. She is not fully aware of what is bothering her for "there are no windows" so she "can't see ...

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