English Coursework Writing 2 Explore Emagine & Entertain (The Gap)

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Yitzy Liebermann                  Date of completion Feb 03’

English Coursework: Writing to Explore, Imagine and Entertain.

The Gap

The year is 2032, I have just escaped in an ‘Eagle’ and I am making my way towards my home planet, Earth.  I am getting a reading on my long-range scanners and it’s Earth!  I have been waiting for this moment for months. I wonder if my house is the same or my friends still remember me.  All I can do now is wait and hope ‘they’ don’t catch me.

It all started 10 years ago when I got a phone call from my friend Danny.

        “Jimmy, phone.”

        “Who for?”

        “You, who else.”

        “Oh right, who is it?”

        “I didn’t ask… just take the phone.”

        “When did he phone?  Just kidding, I got it.”

        

        “Hi, is that Danny, I got…”

“Never mind all that. I just intercepted a virtual message, I think it’s code red. It sounds amazing, no extraordinary…”

        “Just cut to the chase.”

“Oh yeh!  Sorry, they said it was the destroyers again.  One was supposed to have crash-landed this time near that scientific research centre, I heard them saying they want to find out once and for all if it is the Russians or Japanese.”

“When should we go?”

“Now”

I met Danny on the corner of Madison and Barley Street at 10pm.  We made our way towards the centre as fear and excitement grew stronger with each step.  I gave Danny one of my radios in case we lost each other, and we set them on a secure channel.  On the way we agreed to leave before 12am so that our parents wouldn’t worry about us. We could already see from a distance the large sphere like destroyer, this was serious. As we got closer I could hear the explosions and snorting like sounds that were probably the crew themselves, or at least the survivors. The army were already making their way cautiously towards the dangerous destroyer; they had gas masks with a fully armoured suit and were using rocket launches and large tanks to defend themselves. We heard the engines from the fighter planes that were circling overhead. We quickly hid behind the nearest tree to hide from both sides and stay out of the crossfire. We could slowly feel the thickness in the air caused by the spread of thick smoke from the fire. We lost visual contacted with each other and decided to use our radios and split up to have a closer look.

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        “Testing testing, Danny can you hear me?”

        “Loud and clear, I am going to check out the army control”

        “Great! I’m going to take a closer look at the crash site”

“Jimmy, try to stay off the radio for as long as possible, I’m going to be pretty close and I don’t want them to hear me”    

        “Ok.”

I kept a look out as I made my way towards the crashed up aircraft, I dodged between trees and piles of rubble until I was close enough to read the word ‘Hawk 3’.  I could just ...

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