English fiction. Unlikely survival

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Jade Mullaney.

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Unlikely Survival         

Two wolf cubs. Eyes locked, waiting. They both twitched a scruffy ear. They raised a paw, and immediately swiped at each other, but only one cub remained, looking very wet and confused. He looked back at where the other cub was and realised he was standing in the Still-Wet that prey and predators from all over came to drink from. The pond or the Still-Wet - as the wolf liked to call it -  had ceased rippling from when he had fallen in. The cub stared at himself in the water, fascinated by what he thought was another wolf living under the water. His interest was short lived as he heard three sharp bangs, so loud they left an unpleasant ringing in his ears. He heard his mother yelp, “Uff!” was she warning him to stay away? Or was she angry that he had wandered off from the pack again?

                  Wolf was a naughty cub. He was always getting in trouble for straying away from his pack, but today he just had to see what was down the hill, which was why he found himself looking into the pond. He always eventually returned to his pack and his mother knew that so why was she calling to him now, with such an emotion in her voice that Wolf just couldn't comprehend.  Bang! There was that noise again that made the cub want to run and cower behind a tree or in a hole. Bang! He heard his mother scream in agony, forcing the cub to shield his ears from the sound. Bang! The dying wolf's screams died away instantly. Bang!

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A few hours later, after the 'bangs', Wolf crawled out of the hole he had found himself in, sticky from when he had  become so scared he accidentally wet himself. Ears flat against his head, he crawled up the bank, sensing that something was not quite right. There was a strange smell in the air, one that Wolf recognised but under the circumstances couldn't figure out. He was sure that he was going to be in trouble when he reached the pack, for drifting off, at a time that felt so dangerous. He was tired when he returned to the pack, and thus didn't notice anything strange, except that uncanny smell that just wouldn't go away.

                     In the morning, as the light penetrated the forest, the cub awoke and stretched, like a cat does after a long sleep. His mother, was still asleep! He growled and prodded her belly, hoping she would wake up and maybe cough up some food for him. That peculiar smell was still floating about, stronger than last night. He padded around his mother wolf, spotting three holes that he missed earlier on. He finally understood what the smell was. It was the same as prey, but not the prey that runs away like a deer or boar, but the Not-Breath kind. The dead kind – the kind of prey that gets eaten. The wolf howled. A strong lament, projecting his emotions throughout the entire forest. Perhaps he was promising revenge for his murdered pack, but wolfs have no future tense, only past and present.

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                    After howling the cub felt a little better, but had no-idea what to do. His pack usually moved on after a few days of staying in one place, but he had no pack! Should he stay here; where he felt the safest, and knew where the food was, and the major hunters. Or should he try and seek refuge in a new pack where he could learn and grow up, become part of a new wolf family. Undecided, he wandered around and found some over-ripe cloudberries that he snuffled up. ...

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