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Shauna Thomas 11F

Stacey was in love with Liam, and that was something we all knew. One of the flaws in their relationship was Liam didn’t seem to love her. Something had changed in him in the time they had been together, and only he knew what.

     He’d started to treat her like his worst enemy about a year into their relationship. He seemed to have no respect towards her anymore, he didn’t even care. The cracks began to show in small amounts; he’d lie to her by making excuses to get away from her or not spend time with her; anything he could do to avoid being around her.

     When he did have to spend time with her, he would be controlling her. He’d tell her who to speak to, who to look at, what to do, what to wear; anything he could say or do so that he was in total control of her life.

     Liam may have been a little odd at times, but no one thought he was capable of this.

It was one o’clock Friday afternoon, and just like any other day, Stacey and Liam were getting ready for another dull day at university. Liam was acting unusually this particular day, but Stacey couldn’t quite put her finger on what it was that was different. As she was getting ready in the bathroom, she heard the front door slam. She looked out of the bedroom window and saw Liam getting into his car and speeding off down the street.

     When she was finally ready, she left the house and slowly began to walk towards the Psychology block where her first class of the day was. She was wondering why Liam had left in such a hurry. He’d normally wait until she was ready and walk her to class before heading off to his.

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     After about a twenty minute walk, she arrived to see Liam standing at the front of the building holding an extremely large bunch of her favourite flowers.

     “Alright? These are for you.” Liam said.

“Thanks. I wondered where you’d gone…”

     “Oh, sorry I disappeared like that; I went to get these for you,” He handed her the flowers. “I’m so sorry about last night. I didn’t mean it babe. Anyway, I’ve got a surprise for you.         Come with me.”

     He pulled her down the steps, they ran through the car park; they ...

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