First Perceptions of Blanche Dubois - “What are your early perceptions of Blanche?” In what ways has Tennessee Williams created this response?

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First Perceptions of Blanche Dubois

“What are your early perceptions of Blanche?” In what ways has Tennessee Williams created this response?

The delineation of Blanche Dubois as seen in the first chapter of Tennessee Williams ‘A Streetcar Named Desire’ is one of astonishment and acceptance. She has obviously had to travel some distance to reach her destination and I think that this has taken its toll on Blanche and affects her patience later on in the scene, and which may also explain her growing hysteria.

  The first time the Blanche is depicted by the stage directions, the reader (or view of the play) obviously notices that she does not fit in with the poor, run down area of New Orleans that she had entered: “Her expression is one of shocked disbelief… looking as if she were arriving at a summer tea or cocktail party in the garden district…Her delicate beauty must avoid a strong light. There is something about her uncertain manner, as well as her white clothes, that suggests a moth” 

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  From this description, we can infer that, like a moth that is attracted to the light or flame, which will undoubtedly burn it, she too could be attracted to something that could hurt her in some way. The white that she is wearing also suggests purity and innocence, possibly reflecting her arrival to the alien world.

   Throughout the first scene, Blanche is constantly interacting with the different characters of the play, including Eunice, Stella and Stanley. She also only talks to these characters singularly, which allows for dramatic irony to develop and also concentrates the interaction between ...

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The essay has a poor structure. There is some attempt at an introduction, but it was a shame to see reference to chapter and not scene. I would've liked to see some evidence on an argument being formed in the introduction, looking at how Williams presents her as hysteric and out of place. Points seem to be jumbled and short here, and this is clear through the numerous paragraphs. Try and group ideas together, and then comment on techniques as a collection. There is no need to have a paragraph with one sentence such as "Blanche is much more open and talkative with her sister, and is thrilled to see her, although disappointed to see that Stella is living in such an area of New Orleans." This only suggests to the examiner you have little to say on the point, showing your inability to expand and analyse thoroughly. I'm not a big fan of using the first person, and especially phrases such as "I think she is". In my opinion, these suggest an overly personal view, whereas it should be backed up with evidence. Phrases such as "the evidence clearly suggests" or "it could be argued that" will make your argument more convincing. There are often errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar such as "I think has took its toll" which detract from good analysis. A simple proof read should rid of these mistakes.

The analysis here is okay. I would've liked to have seen much more focus on Williams' techniques, rather than discussing the plot and the way Blanche acts. This essay has the potential to be good as it picks up on the main points, but there just needs to be more phrases such as "Williams uses the appearance of Blanche on stage" or "Williams has Blanche seem out of place" to show who is in control. I would advise that you embed quotes, rather than including a lengthy one, which is evident in the second paragraph here. By embedding short quotes, you are able to closely analyse language and pick up on specific words and techniques rather than generalise other long passages. In a question like this, it is key that you discuss the audience response. Comments such as "There seems to be tension between the two sisters" are good, but there needs to be explicit discussion of how the audience would respond to this.

This essay engages at an okay level to the task. There is a sustained discussion of Blanche's perceptions, but I feel this could be made more explicit by discussing the audience's response. Yes, saying "This shows the tension" is correct, but I would like to have seen an exploration of how the audience may react to the situation. This would then allow a progression into why Williams has chosen to present Blanche like this at the very beginning of the play, suggesting her downfall. Examiners are looking for these sorts of insights, beyond simple analysis. It was a shame to see the essay mention "the reader (or view of the play)" as it should surely be the other way round. It is important you show understanding of theatrical devices that a text cannot offer, and I feel through this statement it shows a lack of awareness.