Frankenstein by Mary Shelley - With reference to chapters 11-16, describe the development and change in character that the monster undergoes.

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GCSE English Coursework Assignment: English Literature

Frankenstein

By Mary Shelley

With reference to chapters 11-16, describe the development and change in character that the monster undergoes.

Frankenstein is a classic novel by Mary Shelley, published in 1818. It recounts the life of Victor Frankenstein; Victor is a young, idealistic student of natural philosophy whose aim is to discover the elixir of life. He succeeds in his aim and consequently brings into existence a monstrous creation. However, he abandons his creation, which is then forced to discover the complicated ways in which society and the world works, in a very cruel but candid and unequivocal manner.

        The novel begins in the epistolary style, presenting the story in a series of letters. These letters are from Robert Walton, a British sailor who describes and communicates to his sister, though correspondence, his search for fame and glory by exploring the North Pole. More importantly, his letters also announce the discovery and rescue of a stranger, Victor Frankenstein. Consequently, Victor tells the story of his life to Robert Walton, who then includes it in his letters home to his sister.

        Therefore, Frankenstein is essentially an account of the life of Victor Frankenstein as related to him by a British sailor, Robert Walton, by whom he has been found on the ice floes of the Arctic Ocean. However, Frankenstein’s story contains yet another narrative, that of the monster he has created. Furthermore, the monster includes within his narrative the story of the De Laceys, the family of exiles whom he unsuccessfully tries to make contact with.

        To synopsize, Frankenstein is one novel, but within it there are several narratives and consequently it contains several contrasting points of view. These points of view are stories told in the first person, initially starting with Walton, then Victor Frankenstein and finally that of the monster. Walton’s narrative is the frame in which the other narratives are embedded. However, the monster’s narrative is structurally central to the novel; without the monster’s narrative there is less sympathy for his character, because within his narrative he shares his experiences and the reader can obtain a different perspective of the characters. Each narrative consists of the thoughts, views, emotions and experiences of solely, the character that it belongs to.

        Victor begins with an account of his early family life and background in Geneva. He tells Walton of his tranquil and serene domestic life and of Elizabeth, the young orphan who at a very early age became part of his distinguished family. He remembers how his mother died of scarlet fever, which she caught from Elizabeth, and that his mother’s dying wish was that Elizabeth and Frankenstein would one day marry.

        She joined the hands of Elizabeth and myself. ‘My children,’ she said, “My firmest hopes of future happiness were placed on the prospect of your union.” 

        Frankenstein also explains how his, almost obsessive, interest in science and natural philosophy was fuelled; when Victor was young he found a book on the alchemists. The alchemists’ aims were to turn base metal into gold and to find the elixir of life. The latter captures the young Victor’s imagination and from then on he spent most of his time studying science and mixing the alchemists’ findings with modern science. He also discovers the use of electricity, which in the time of Mary Shelley was an extremely new element of science. (Mary Shelley acquired her knowledge of science to write Frankenstein from her husband Percy Shelley, who although a poet, also had a great interest in science.)

        Victor’s interest and expertise in science eventually takes him to the University of Ingolstadt. Here, his experiments lead him to the discovery of the secret of the life force. Following this discovery Victor constructs a human form out of dead human tissue, and brings his monstrous creation to life with the use of electricity. Frightened out of his wits at what he has created, Frankenstein deserts his hideous creation and abandons himself to despair. He experiences both a mental and physical breakdown. While his friend Henry Clerval nurses him back to a healthy state, it appears that the monster has vanished.

        As Victor is regaining his health, he receives a sorrowful letter from his father telling him of his younger brother, William’s death. He has been murdered. Frankenstein defers his return to his home of Geneva because he is reluctant to confront his relationship with Elizabeth. By creating the monster Victor is usurping the role of women, in that he is reproducing and creating life, which one could consider to be a sign that he is scared of his own sexuality. It is also suggestive of the fact that Victor had an Oedipus complex and loved his mother too much. By bringing into existence the monster, Frankenstein is taking over the role of both God and women.

        Despite this, Frankenstein does eventually return to Geneva to comfort his family. However, while there he catches a glimpse of the monster, who he rightly assumes, is the murderer of his brother. Nevertheless he doesn’t say anything to anyone, and it is Justine, another member of the Frankenstein household who is branded the murderer. Victor chooses to remain silent and keep his knowledge of what happened to William a secret, consequently, Justine is publicly executed. Beleaguered by his guilt at everything he has done, Victor seeks solace and refuge in the harsh, wilderness of the Alps. While there he gains some comfort from the sublime mountain scenery.

                 These sublime and magnificent scenes afforded me the greatest consolation that I was capable of receiving. They elevated me from all littleness of feeling, and although they did not remove my grief, they subdued and tranquilised it.”

          However it is also here, in the mountains, that Frankenstein and the monster are reunited, and the confrontation between them takes place, amid the snow and ice. By providing the characters with this setting for their reunion, Mary Shelley is illustrating to the reader, in a dramatic way, both Frankenstein’s, and the monster’s shared isolation from society.

        As the monster approaches Frankenstein, Victor is disgusted at its ugliness and sees the monster as a fiend that is constantly tormenting him,

        

        “Begone, vile insect! Or rather, stay, that I may trample you to dust. That I could, with the extinction of your miserable existence, restore those victims whom you have so diabolically murdered.”

        Ironically, as the monster and Victor argue, Victor full of rage, rejects the monster with savage passion, whereas the monster expresses his feelings calmly and eloquently. As they discuss their feelings towards each other it becomes clear that a parallel to Adam and God is present in the monster’s mind. The monster feels that he ought to be like Victor’s Adam, but instead he is treated like Satan, an angel who challenged God and was driven from the sky to create a city, Pandemonium. Just as God drove Satan from Heaven, Victor is trying to drive away the monster. It also begins to become apparent to the reader that the monster is lonely, and just as God gave Adam a companion in Eve, the monster wants Frankenstein to give him a companion. The allusion to Adam in chapter 10 anticipates the monster’s request for Victor to make him a companion later on.

        The monster tries to explain to Frankenstein the way in which society has treated him, yet Victor will not listen, he is too full of rage and passion to think clearly.

 

        You, my creator, abhor me; what hope can I gather from your fellow creatures, who owe me nothing?”

        Also, the monster desperately wants Victor to listen to his story, and repeats the words, “Listen to me,” several times over. The monsters situation evokes the reader’s sympathy; Victor’s crime is to have refused to nurture and look after his creation. The monster says to Victor,

         

“Listen to my tale; when you have heard that, abandon or commiserate me, as you shall judge that I deserve. But hear me.”

        

        Eventually the monster’s dignity and eloquence persuade Victor to accept his responsibilities and listen to his story. In turn the monster then provides for the reader a history of his life and the inner most embedded narrative begins.

        The monster begins his tale with an account of his initial confusion after Victor had brought him into existence in an alien world and abandoned him. He describes this moment as being, “the original era,” When the monster is first brought to life he is utterly confused about his surroundings and unimaginably disorientated. He has a state of absolute innocence that is similar to when a child first comes into the world.

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“No distinct ideas occupied my mind; all was confused.”

 He is suddenly presented with four very new and alien senses, of smell, touch, sight and hearing, which he is extremely unfamiliar with. The beginning of chapter fifteen is mainly concerned with how the monster discovers the way in which his newfound senses operate.

        “All the events of that period appear confused and indistinct. A strange multiplicity of sensations seized me, and I saw, felt, heard, and smelt at the same time; and it was, indeed, a long time before I learned to distinguish between the operations of ...

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