Although I was enveloped in deathly silence, somehow, I could sense that I was not alone. Somewhere in the darkness, lurked something evil and I was convinced it was out to get me. Suddenly I felt a dead cold hand right on my shoulder and I looked up to the gravestone but I couldn’t see anyone. I turned around and what I saw made me freeze with fear. I saw a face and looked at its green eyes and its dark face which was hard to determine. All I could see clearly was its green eyes. It had white hair and yellow teeth that had the worst smell ever, but this did not concern me at that moment. However, it was its big eyes that made it look evil. At that moment I realized he wasn’t one of us.
Trembling with fear, I looked hard into its mean eyes and I stood still as a statue. My knees were shakeng and my heart started to pound so fast I thought it would jump out of my chest. I realized something was wrong. I wondered if I would ever be able to go back to my normal life and my social life and get to see my family again. I couldn’t give up on my own family. I had to take care of them in this harsh world. I wanted to let out a loud scream so someone could help me but I was helpless. I couldn’t even breathe so how was I supposed to scream for help. I stood up and tried to run away. This monster was running right after me. While I was looking behind and running as fast as I could, I think I smashed into a tree.
Waking up in the morning, I was surprised to find myself alone in a hospital room. I still was shocked by the event that happened but I was so scared to tell anyone. I still didn’t know where I was excactly. My head felt like it was going to explode. It felt as if something trying to get out, and when it couldn’t, it kept drilling through my head. I heard the door open and I lost consciousness just as I saw that monster again.
Once again the roar of thunder broke the eerie silence of the night. It was raining hard and I could hear the bats flipping their wings through the dead silence of the night. In the darkness of the night I wondered what I was doing alone in this graveyard. I had run away from the haunted house and imagined that I would be safer and hopefully find someone to share my fear that made my legs shiver. Finally I heard a voice approaching from behind. I couldn’t tell what it was. I was in a rush and I couldn’t think of what to do. I was also scared to look around because of the fear to see something I didn’t want to. I looked around but all I could see was the lonely tree and the silence of the night. The silence of the cold night made me feel vulnerable just as I was thinking if it was a good idea to run away and go out. I had the feeling that something was passing right through me, making the hairs on my arms stand right up.
The story takes place in a graveyard. “the roar of a thunder” that shatters “the eerie silence of the night is used to portray how an extreme weather can convert a mild night into a thrilling experience.