How does Roal Dahl create unease and tension in 'The Landlady'

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How does Roal Dahl create unease and tension in the story "The Landlady"

In this essay I am going to discuss how Dahl uses language, characters, and objects to create tension and unease in the story "The Landlady".

The story begins by describing a long train journey taken by Billy Weaver. When he arrived "it was about nine o clock in the evening and the moon was coming up out of a clear starry sky". The fact that it is night and the moon is up over a starry night, gives the town an eerie sense to it, as if it's a special night, and a night where something is going to happen. Also the fact that it is night-time suggests that there are going to be few people on the streets.
"The air was deadly cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks".
This sentence adds deeper atmosphere to the town, as it wasn't just cold, but "deadly" cold. The blade of ice, suggests something harmful, dangerous might happen to him.

"He had never been to Bath before". "Billy was seventeen"
He is unfamiliar of the area, a foreigner, and therefore might be prone to be misled or misguided. The fact that he is relatively young and inexperienced might add to the chance of being misled. Because he is so young, he seems quite an innocent figure in the story.

"a line of tall houses on each side, all of them identical". "the handsome façades were cracked and blotchy".
This town seems unnatural to have a line of houses, each identical to one another, even in their states of ruin. Also the tallness of the houses can seem like stretched houses, when someone looks at a whole line of them. This could signify a certain distortion in the town; a twisted town which shouldn't be trusted.
The fact that all of them are in a ruined, neglected state could mean that no one lives in those houses any more. If this is true, then the isolation of Billy in a sort of a "Dead area" of the town is frightening.

"Suddenly in a window that was brilliantly illuminated ...Billy caught sight of a printed notice ...BED AND BREAKFAST".
The brightly-lit window, out of a dark street, that catches his eye immediately, seems very strange. Especially the fact that it draws him towards it, as if he were magnetised to the window. The tremendous warmth originating from this window pulls him towards it.

As he looks in notices the "velvety green curtains", "a bright fire burning", "a pretty little dachshund curled up by the fire", "a baby-grand piano", "pleasant furniture", and " a large parrot in a cage".
This all seems very surreal, as if it is too good to be true. A bright warm fire, a little dog curled up and napping by it, a nice cosy feel to it, is all too surreal. Therefore instead of giving us the impression of a nice room, we feel there is something sinister underneath the warm exterior, but we can't place our fingers onto what exactly it is.

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He contemplates with himself the other alternatives of accommodation, and clearly talks himself into going to the Bell and Dragon, as "he was a tiny bit frightened" of boarding houses.
However, as he is about to walk away, the sign catches his attention once again:
"his eye was caught and held in a most peculiar manner ... it said BED AND BREAKFAST, BED AND BREAKFAST, BED AND BREAKFAST ...each word was like a large black eye staring at him."
This notice seems to be 'alive'. It is as if the sign is hypnotising him, in making him not leave. It is drawing him ...

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