"I'm the King of the Castle" - with close references to the text discuss the relevance of the novel's title.

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“I’m the King of the Castle”: with close references to the text discuss the relevance of

the novel’s title.

This novel tells the story of two boys who, basically, are at war with each other. At first, it is

hard to understand what the point in them being at war is. There seems to be no special

prize for the winner, and it is hard to find any goal which they are aiming to achieve.

However, what is evident , is that there is a strong drive to war behind one of the boys, and

this rubs off on to the other boy has he tries to counteract.

‘I’m the king of the castle… and your the dirty rascal’

       This is well known children’s playground saying. It is said by a child who finds

himself in a position, where he perceives himself standing higher, than any other child around

him. This saying is usually just passed off as  a bit of child play. However, I believe that it

illustrates a natural instinct amongst humans. And, as a dominating theme of  this novel is  

human instinct, we can see that there is a relevance to the title. The human instincts that are

illustrated are, the desire to have their own home and space, where they are free to do what

they like, and also to acquire territory. If you take a look at almost any history text book,

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you will see that wars dominate. The whole of human history is riddled with wars. Wars

have become landmarks in the history of civilised human society. All these wars, all these

lives lost, stem from one thing, the instinct among humans to acquire  territory and the instinct

among humans to defend and not to back down.  Not to back down, from invaders,

persecution or oppression.

        Susan Hill demonstrates this in her characters,  Kingshaw and Hooper , in ‘I’m the

king of the Castle’. At first we read  about Hooper. We read about his family ...

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This essay begins to make some good points about conflict and how this is used as an important theme in the novel; however the structure of the response needs to be planned more carefully so the interpretations being explored are communicated more effectively. 3 Stars