Immortality-the Soul She Lost.

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IMMORTALITY-THE SOUL SHE LOST

Andy had told me to meet him at the creek, but the strange occurrence of people disappearing was an uncomfortable thought. I had first thought I wouldn’t go but Andy persuaded me to meet him there but still I felt anxious and afraid.

The sign outside the creek read DO NOT TRESPASS but this sign made me more curious and I went to the creek. I waited a few minutes before Andy turned up. The night was falling and it was becoming tenebrous. Andy had been bragging about a huge mansion he’d seen father in the creek there, but the thing was there was I anticipated that no one would be in the grounds of the mansion. We should have expected the unexpected.

“You had to choose this day didn’t you”? I exclaimed.

“Why? you scared?” Andy replied in a rude voice.

I didn’t answer but yes I was afraid.

“Just because it’s Friday the thirteenth, you don’t believe in all that rubbish do you?”

“Yes”.

        

This sudden outburst made Andy hysterical and made him cry with laughter, because I “believed all that rubbish”. But I knew Andy had his doubts about the urban legend.

We kept walking for around twenty minutes before I saw a humungous house, well mansion. This is what Andy had told me about although the mansion seemed hideous and obnoxious from the outside. “Andy is you stupid? You tell me how do you get in a house with no door or any kind of visible entrance”? I asked in an insulting way

“O shit, you know what, your right, but there must be some sort of secret passage or something”.

“Who’s there show yourselves” a voice shouted.

“Oi come here!” he shouted again.

“Run”! Andy screamed.

We ran until we reached an alley full of sewage water, the smell was just

Malodorous and it looked vulgar. We had to look for a bridge or we would have to jump over all the water flowing past.

 “You two” someone shouted.

“We’re going to get caught” I shrieked.

We managed to jump over the gully and we both hid behind a barrel. We saw four other children our age near the gully looking petrified. But

Were they just investigating the grounds of the creek or were they running from someone? A voice inside me asked.

Three of the kids jumped over the gully and ran towards me and Andy.

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One looked fat and chubby. The other two looked like twins with their brown hair and sports clothing. The other kid kept running and disappeared in the darkness.

“Hello I’m Ash” one of the kids calmly said.

“I’m Beth” another kid said.

“And I’m Jack” another kid whispered.

I wasn’t sure whether to trust these people or not as one of them looked very anxious to go.

“I’m Andy and this is Ben” Andy sighed.

I was wondering if these kids knew how to get into the mansion but they didn’t speak much after we found out each other’s ...

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