In scene 5, the relationship between Rita and Denny appears to have deteriorated dramatically but we see this from Rita's prospective. Imagine Denny confiding to a friend his own troubles.

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In scene 5, the relationship between Rita and Denny appears to have deteriorated dramatically but we see this from Rita’s prospective. Imagine Denny confiding to a friend his own troubles. Write this as a conversation, which could be inserted as an extra scene. Use stage directions

At the pub at the end of a Victorian looking road in the north of England,

there is a large oak door with songs of happiness drifting outwards into the streets..

Denny, who is tall and in his thirties looks frustrated and angry, he slams open the large oak door of the pub to find a smoke filled joyful pub with a large dark wooden corner bar. The lighting is bright. He pushes people out his way until he gets to his regular corner. His friend Jack is already sitting at one of the ten round tables in front of the bar, drinking one of eight choices of larger.

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Denny: I don’t understand that woman! What’s she need an education for anyway?

(Denny while still angrily speaking to Jack goes to the bar and chooses a pint of larger then sits back down)

Denny: Just an essay. It wasn’t as if it was important or nothin!

Jack: What y’ talking bout Denny? What essay?

Denny: She makes out like I don’t give her nothin. We don’t ever go down to the pub anymore, don’t go anywhere wiv each other!

Jack: Denny. You talking about Rita again?

Denny: It’s always bloody Rita I’m ...

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