Libby can you help me with these bags please" snapped Anna her beautifully shaped figure struggerling though the front door with

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Libby gradually walked down the lightly shaded path, her chestnut coloured hair flapping in the warm breeze. Her dazzling blue eyes shimmering in the sun, even though the day was sunny a light overcast of clouds cluttered up the afternoon sky. The large oak trees hovered their branches over the path as if they wanted to reach the other side. Many of their leaves had turned into beautiful shades of amber, gold and russet and fallen to the pavement below. Libby had her coat over her arm and her bag-now signed by all her friends- slung over her opposite shoulder. She felt somewhat saddened as she was leaving the city not knowing if she would ever return. Libby reached the top of the hill that over looked the city, it was so beautiful even if it was a view of blocks of high raised flats and factories but it was a view that Libby wasn’t going to see for a long time. She carried on walking down the path thinking about what she was going to do when she was got home, she crossed the road and continued to walk down the hill. She had lived in Oakhaven since she was little but now it was the time to move on that is with the help of her mum and dad. You see her mum had decided that she didn’t want to live in Oakhaven anymore with Libby’s dad because she had fallen in love with someone else which is really not surprising as she was only staying with him because of Libby’s sake. Libby’s dad didn’t love Libby, in his eyes she was a mistake and didn’t want to look after Libby by himself but time had now come for him to look after her he decided to send her to live with Libby’s mum’s stepsister. Libby’s dad much like Libby’s mum had found other someone to love which lived with them in there house. Libby didn’t like her mum’s boyfriend because her treated her like a baby. When he first came over he gave Libby a Barbie doll and when she went over to her friends house he gave her two mobiles just in case one of the batteries ran out, she was only next-door! So even if Libby had the choice of staying with her mum she didn’t want to. Libby didn’t like her dad’s girlfriend either in her eyes she was a snobby tart who wore hardly anything and had a rubbish attitude. Libby walked in the front door hung her coat on the coat rail and dumped her bag under it. She could hear her mum on the phone in the kitchen and her dad packing her mums remaining things into the boxes that had started to pile up in the hall as she to was moving away from Oakhaven to live with her boyfriend. Libby could tell there was bad vibes as soon as Anna- her dads girlfriend- came through dad’s girlfriend came through the front door.

“Libby can you help me with these bags please” snapped Anna her beautifully shaped figure struggerling though the front door with several bags in each hand, “Where’s your dad on a time like this? I shouldn’t be doing this is in my condition. Is his always this lazy ah?”

“You should know. Haven’t you been shopping for him before? And besides you wont have me to help you as of tomorrow” said Libby taking for of the bags that were grasped in her hand.

“Yes of course I have. When he used to stay with me in my flat and I’m sure he will start after you go” said Anna following Libby into the kitchen “Anyway I didn’t have to shop for you or your mum, you two eat like bloody pigs “

“Anna I am right here,” said Lisa Libby’s mum putting the phone down on the receiver. Even though she was moving and leaving Libby to move in with her stepsister she wouldn’t let Anna boss her or her daughter around.

“How could I be so rude?” said Anna sarcastically

“ Yes quite…Anyway Libby my sister said that everything is fine for you to stay. She’s got you into a school and I think she would quite enjoy the company” said Lisa

“Well I am glad everything is fine because I certainly couldn’t enjoy your company”

“ Oh so you can string a sentence together? Just next time remember that you can say nice things about my daughter” said Lisa.

“ Well if you think she is so important why isn’t she moving with you to live with your boyfriend?” questioned Anna

“ We have already been through this Anna. She can’t move in with me because we are moving to France, it’s bad enough for her to move and leave all her friends but to move abroad as well?”

“What an excuse”, sighed Anna

Libby walked into the living room just as her dad her came out.

“Cheer up, I may have not wanted you but watching you grow up I have grown to love you even though I don’t want you here with me it doesn’t mean that I don’t love you. I’m just trying to do what is best for you. You do now that don’t you”

“I do now”

Anyway how could she be happy she had been living with her mum, her dad and Anna who were permanently down each others throats even if it was just about the washing up. They were at it again.

“Anna let me cook it’s my treat before I go. I mean what wrong with pork stew and boiled potatoes,” said Lisa

“More like what is right with it. Besides it should be my treat and you should be eating more healthier food”

“Listen why don’t we ask Libby”, suggested James

“Oh what brought this on James? The next thing that will happen is she will be living with us”, snapped Anna

“No that wont happen I just think that she should have a choice in something that she eats I mean she has to move away from here and her parents because it suits us”

“ Okay but I bet she will just choose her mums option because she hates me,” said Anna giving Lisa an evil look.

“ Look”, said James “I don’t know how much more of this I can take”

“Okay. We will ask Libby”, Sighed Anna

“Libby! Libby!”

“Coming!” Shouted Libby getting off the sofa and walking into the kitchen

“I’m sure you have heard all the commotion so which is it to be?” Asked James

“Neither” replied Libby” Maybe we could have a big buffet?”

“Yeah that’s a good idea,” said Lisa

“Fine have whatever you want and don’t care about me and my child”, snapped Anna

“Libby isn’t yours,” said Lisa

“You really as thick as two short planks” Said Anna

“Your pregnant!” Shouted Lisa

“Clever .It took you long enough you to notice” said Anna

“Why didn’t you tell me?” said Lisa

“Why didn’t you tell me?” said Anna

“Tell you what?”

“Don’t’ play dumb with me. I know you are pregnant too”.

“That is unbelievable, How dare you make a accusation like that” said Lisa out raged

“Well it’s not an accusation. I know you are pregnant. I heard you on the phone to that boyfriend of yours. Just yesterday”, smiled Anna

“But it’s not true ”, sighed Lisa

“Fine if you say so”, said Anna “Look libs your mum is pregnant even if she says she’s not”

“ I wish people would stop telling me to say look, what’s there to look at? I’m moving away because nobody wants me and dad never wanted me so what the big deal if mums or Anna is pregnant? It’s not like you to are married anymore, I just hope that you can raise your children with love and call none of them a mistake and that you love them with all your heart because I wouldn’t want them to grow up knowing no one wanted them because there were a mistake. Like I was and I have”, said Libby

“Libby. You shouldn’t have said that,” said Lisa

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“Why not? It’s true though isn’t, it you cant deny it. It’s not my fault you got pregnant when you were fifteen”, snapped Libby

“Who told you that?” asked Lisa

“Doors don’t block out voices. They don’t hear something and think oh yea Libby isn’t supposed to know that, I’ll make sure she can’t here the raised voices,” cried Libby “ I think I will just go to bed now.  If I had one wish it would be that I was born into a family that loved me even if I was a mistake or that you had loved me ...

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