Marlboro Marine

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Kelly de Souza

    10D

Unit 2: Descriptive Writing

Marlboro Marine: James Blake Miller

(First Draft 23/5/08)

Helmet full of tears and dirt on it worn out fabric, was strapped tightly on his head; the only shelter from constant visits of death’s bullet.

Covered in bruises, paint, mud and blood; his face unshaven, unwashed for days on end. Fear was wiped all over his grim face. Fear for being captured, fear of losing, fear of certain death. There was also an obvious expression of exhaustion, from the many endless nights gone without rest from the paranoia his fear were to come true.   

And those eyes must have seen some horrible things. Eyes narrowly opened to seen in to the distance, we see his regret and despair for all the things he had done, all the lives he has taken. How to him he was a monsters to himself. His pink as his he has been crying from guilt and despaired.

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    His only comfort was a small stick cigarette just holding in his scarcely opened mouth. Taking the smoke in, he was soothe for just another day of war. He kept telling his self it was almost over, but it lasted forever, they dragged on. Coming to battle he never thought it would be this way; he figured it was all about glory and fame. But now he finally understands what was meant by ‘not to judge a book by it cover’.

    This morning was no exception either, another for his comrades died today. Shot in the ...

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