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Original Writing: Lost in the Darkness

He saw a flicker of movement a hundred yards up the deserted city road. It was hard to see, the moon being the only source of light, but Tom was pretty sure it was a German soldier. Moving forward swiftly, he swore under his breath as he slipped in a small hole in the ground, undoubtedly caused by last week’s bombing. The sound of his voice carried painfully far in the dead of the silent night. Tom winced, expecting wailing of the alarm bell to be his death call. He was lucky, as the only sound greeting him was the eerie calls of owls, crying to each other across the city.

It was a bitter black night in Picardie. The northern-French town had been left battered, bruised and in tears after the impact of the German advance. They called it the ‘Great War’ at home, Tom thought to himself as he advanced further into the open, hoping to find somewhere to rest for the night. They even said ‘it will be over by Christmas’. Christmas had gone, and so had the Christmas after that. It was now 1917.

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His thoughts were promptly interrupted by another stumble on the loose gravel. He slipped, and this time fell onto the ground with a painfully loud thump. Tom’s fears were met, as a shrill cry of a soldier shouting an alert echoed through the desolate town.  He had no choice now. Abandoning his backpack, he got up and ran down the road. Thankfully, the French architecture decorated the town with many alleyways which Tom used to his advantage, swerving through the streets, trying to lose his pursuers.

Was this the end? ‘No,’ thought Tom. He wouldn’t back down. He ...

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