Original writing- My Decision about a Scary Ride

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    My Decision about a Scary Ride

   

 As we entered the gigantic theme park on a lovely summer day a voice from behind us shouted,

    “STOP!”

     We quickly turned around like spinning machines and we saw a 6 foot tall security guard running toward us like fast cheetah, his face was red like a rosy red tomato and it looked like his hat was going to fall off. I got a bit nervous because he was running towards us like we had just killed someone. I turned around and looked at Alisha and I saw that she was looking down with embarrassment, then I looked around me and I saw that everyone was staring at us like we had committed some sort of crime.

    “Girls you have forgotten your tickets” the security guard said.

I felt so relieved that I let out a big sigh, like I had just ran a marathon, and Alisha and I started to laugh. After that we got our tickets from the security guard and headed towards the first ride which was called Space Invaders.

      When we got to the Space Invaders I could smell the horrible smell of oil, which smelt like a leaking gas, which made me feel a bit sick. I could also hear the big racket of the ride, and the screaming and shouting of the people on it, when it went whooshing past me in to the far distance like a crying baby slowly falling asleep. We waited in the queue for about ten minutes before it was our turn.

         When we got off the Space Invaders Alisha and I were just about to walk to the next ride when we saw a group of people that looked a bit like the characters from Harry Potter. One of them had bright red hair which made it look like his hair was on fire, this boy looked the same as Ronald from Harry Potter. Another boy that was with him had really big glasses that covered half of his face and it looked like the character of Harry Potter, and there was one girl that had white hair which made her look about 90 years old.  I glared at there faces properly and they looked quite familiar so I said to Alisha,

Join now!

   “Alisha don’t these people look familiar?” and she said,

    “Yes they do look quite familiar.”

      Now we were both confused, so we decided to forget about it and walk off All of a sudden they started taking there hair off which made us realise that they were not a weird group of people but they were someone else.

They were the rest of our mates Aziza, Amana and Sabah. Alisha and I looked at each other and burst out laughing. Then we said to the rest of our friends,

    “Come on ...

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