Persuasive Writing - the need to investigate Israel's actions in Palestine.

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 On July 16th, 2014, Four boys of the Bakr family ventured along the coastline of Gaza to play a game of hide and seek. Seemingly innocent, children enjoying the fruit of their childhood- until shots were heard overhead, and before they could flee, the shot in the sky was suddenly hurling at them, full speed, full power and full effect. The first shell killed nine-year-old Ishmail. Moments later, a second missile aimed at the fleeting children destroyed 11-year-old Motasem's skull, pierced the chest of 13-year-old Haman, and penetrated the stomach of 21-year-old Mohammad, all 3 of whom died shortly afterwards. And the reason? These children were unique- they had a particular characteristic that led to two ballistic missiles being shot at them. They were Palestinian. The perpetrator? Israel, a nation that refuses to be accountable for the grief and injustice towards innocent Palestinians. This isn't ok, and it's time we investigate israel.

Israeli Defence Force's (IDF) spokesperson called the incident "a tragic outcome", defending its military action citing that they confused the kids with Hamas militants. The report published by the IDF in 2015 exonerated themselves from any responsibility claiming that the area was a known Hamas base contradicting the testimonies of international journalist claiming they had not seen hamas militants in the area. Seven years later, justice for the Bakr family has yet to be seen.

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An incident of this magnitude perpetrated by a foreign state or organisation to any developed country would surely result in international backlash and call for conviction.

So why is it that Israel hasn't been convicted of war crimes?

The simple answer is that it has never been open to independent investigations such as one by the International Criminal Court, ICC, that was formed to investigate and prosecute the gravest violations of humanitarian laws, including crimes against humanity and war crimes. While the Israeli prime minister labels any inquiry from an independent body into the situation in ...

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