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104 House

Lolage Street

Newport

Isle of Wight

Dear councillor,

                         An issue has arisen. I understand that you must get many letters informing you of the problems bringing our island down, and that reading each and every one must seem extremely tedious for you – and so I thank you in advance for taking the time to read mine. I’m a student of Medina High School, travelling on a public bus to school during the rush hour each morning and, as I’m sure you’re already aware of, the traffic accompanying me and fellow students on this journey is horrendous. It is this journey into Newport each morning that brings dread to the hearts of the many thousands that too have to suffer this mind-numbing experience of driving along at a speed of one-mile-per-hour, all to reach destinations that ideally should take at least half the time to reach than they actually do. Problems like this may seem insignificant in comparison to many others you encounter with, and that a financially possible solution may seem distant, but I’d appreciate it if you’d take into consideration some of my suggestions.

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         It is to my knowledge that the island of its 380 km² is home to a weighty 63,874 cars, and so you can only imagine the hassle brought be a large percentage of these cars during morning rush hour. Not only does the slow movement of the traffic produce excess greenhouse gasses, through unnecessary fuel burning whilst waiting in traffic jams, but also causes a major inconvenience where time of arrival is concerned. It is now becoming a routine for my bus to arrive much later than customary each morning, leaving myself and many others waiting outside ...

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