There are many use of the literary device diction in this poem. Reason so is that the poem is written in a child’s viewpoint, where a child (still in his early years) would have lack the expertise and handiness in his vocabulary and language. Example of use is in the first line ‘millionbillionwillion’ where it was used by the kid to emphasize the lengthy distance of home to school (yet not having the understanding to express in a grammatically correct way). In line 16, ‘lessins’ refers to lessons. A similar ‘mistake’ occurred in line 19; classrooms interpreted as ‘glassrooms.’ Notions like lessons and classrooms are unfamiliar objects to the child, things that he is unaccustomed to. He might have misheard the words, and that tied in with minor knowledge of the outside world has resulted in misspelt words and erroneous perceptions. In line 23, the word ‘wellies’ is incorrect. The correct term would be Wellington boots. The word is very infantile and childish, showing he is still in his very youthful days. Another literary device is personification. It is shown in line 8 and 9 ‘…..Games That are rough, that swallow you up.’ Here an object (games) has been given a human-like quality, which is to swallow. The use of literary devices in this poem is to demonstrate the lively imagination possessed by the kid.
The tone is confounded and befuddled. This is what is felt by the kid while in the course of adjusting to the yet inexperienced stage of life. This is indicated in the lines where he misunderstood on the bell’ Waiting for the bell to go. (To go where?)’ and how he has false beliefs such as ‘……wolves and monsters? Things that carry off and eat children? .The mood is humorous. It is something that we all have felt in our life, and it relives back the memories of old times. This comical side of the poem is entertaining and amusing for it conveys the childhood innocence that we all once owned, like missing our mum …‘I wish she was here.’ And his cute misinterpretation of the teacher ; ‘Tea-cher. The one who makes the tea.’ . With tone and mood we were able to put ourselves in the kid’s shoes and feels what he felt.
The issues and concerns raised is first the puzzled mind of the kid while making his own assumptions in his mind on his first day of school. This is conveyed through his vivid creative thoughts; ‘What does a lessin look like ?Sounds small and slimy .They keep them in the glassrooms.,Whole rooms made out of glass. Imagine.’ He feels that way as he would now have to adjust to the out of regular way of life from then on. The second would be the attachment between the parent and child. Evidence of this is when he yearns for his mother;’ I wish she was here.’ His false belief in ‘…wolves and monsters? Things that carry off and eat children?’ is also proof of his attachment; he is still at an age where is very gullible and considers the words of parents to be all true. He also remembers the words of his mum –‘Mummy said it would come in useful.’ even though there is much to occupy his mind.
All in all, the poem has succeeded in allowing us to place ourselves into the head of a kid and see life through his eyes. We were able to inquire into the state of mind and the emotional state of the kid as he made his step into a new realm.
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