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The Crash

Screams of terror swell throughout the plane as the brutal lightning kept attacking the propellers of the plane like a wild animal attacking its prey. As the plane’s decent was imminent, passengers ran around in a chaotic frenzy looking for a way out of this tin of isolation which was leading them to the wild waves of water below them. As the final blow of lightning struck the side of the plane, there was a massive grind as if the plane was moaning with excruciating pain. The hole that was created sucked the majority of people out like a vacuum leaving the plane with a lot less screaming but those still remaining were now helpless as the plane plummeted into the sea.

        The survivors of the vacuuming of the plane were fighting for their lives now in the disorienting sea, swallowing the mere specks of people under its mighty current. Time passed. The sun rose and the night disappeared along with the storm. Not far from the storm lay the passengers of the plane: wet, cold and unconscious on an island.

        Confused and scared, each survivor awoke realising the great immensity of their situation. A man with a peaceful looking face and dark blond hair staggered across the beach, just gazing out at the sea as if it was mesmerising him. He croaked as he was trying to speak, “W…What has just… happened?”

A man appeared behind him.

“Looks like the plane went down and we fortunately landed on this island,” replied a man with a calm tone to his voice.

“My name’s Clive,” said the man with the calm voice.

“I’m Paul. Please tell me have you seen my children?

“No, sorry”

“Are you sure? There identical twins, they’re seven but they look very old for their age.”

Clive felt awkward being told this, as he didn’t know what to say to Paul.

“Sorry-

“Please, help me look for them. They can’t…”

“They can’t what?”

“Swim.”

        Paul walked off from Clive, feeling sick with fear for his children. Deep down he knew his children’s fate. Paul continued on walking along the stretch of beach until Clive and the five other male survivors of the crash caught up with him.

“Paul, wait!! We need to stick together to get off this island. You can’t go wandering off alone. These three made it as well.”

One of the other survivors pushed through to the front. He was a tall and well-built man with his clothes all in tatters.

“Looks like everyone else must have died from the crash. Survival of the fittest, that’s what this is,” said the man with tattered clothes

Paul filled with tormenting anger from this man’s comment, as he didn’t want to think of his children as dead.

“Shut the hell up you! Who knows? There could be survivors on other islands around here,” yelled Paul in an explosive tone

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“Look around fool! There in’t an island around here ‘part from this one we’re stuck on” Replied the man with sarcasm.

Paul walked off, this time away from the beach and into the overgrowth of the island. He thought about his children and their gentle faces struggling in the sea. Paul wish he had sent his twins to go swimming  as they would have had a better chance of survival in the sea but he knew that it was his fault why they did not go due to his busy job. He continued walking until a silver shimmer caught his ...

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