The death in Emily Dickinson's poem "I heard a Fly buzz-when I died" is painless but striking.

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The death in Emily Dickinson's poem "I heard a Fly buzz—when I died" is painless but striking.  The appearance of the fly is startling at first because it is unexpected.  The setting of the poem is the speaker's death bed, what is an ordinary fly doing there?  Obviously the speaker is waiting to die, she (if I may give the speaker a gender) has "willed my Keepsakes—Signed away What portion of me be Assignable—". [lines 9-11]  She appears to have accepted her death but is waiting for something amazing to happen.  The room is quiet but with a sense of anticipation "The Stillness in the Room Was like the Stillness in the Air—Between the Heaves of Storm—".  There is a peaceful atmosphere yet death is the storm to come.  The reader senses that the speaker and mourners are expecting some spectacular event at the moment of her death.  "The Eyes around—had wrung them dry—And Breaths were gathering firm For that last Onset—when the King Be witnessed—in the Room—".  [lines 5-8]  This stanza suggests that the mourners have ceased crying and were now waiting to witness something incredible when the speaker dies.  "Last onset" is an oxymoron; "onset" means a beginning, and "last" means an end. For Christians, death is the beginning of eternal life, death brings revelation, when God or the nature of eternity becomes known.  The "King" could be a reference to God, perhaps they are expecting the hand of God to reach down and spirit her away to Heaven.  This suspense filled moment is interrupted by a buzzing fly who seems to be unaware of the grim situation.  The fly is doing what a fly does, unaffected by the speakers death.  We consider the fly to be inconsequential, while the fly does not think about us at all.  Its life does not stop because the speaker was dying, in fact the fly does not even notice.  The speaker and mourners see the fly and believe that it has caused them to miss the moment of her death when in actuality there was nothing to see.  There is no large flash of light or supernatural event, just the simple buzzing of a fly.  The speaker says "There interposed a fly—With Blue—uncertain, stumbling Buzz—Between the light—and me—And then the Windows failed—and then I could not see to see." [lines 12-16]   While she and the mourners were waiting for some miraculous occurrence this fly distracted them and they missed the moment of her death.  But they didn't realize that in the end there was nothing to see.  Our death is natural, we die just like every other living being on the planet.  It is the one moment where we return to nature and are no better or worse than the rest of the animals.  This reinforces that death, even the death of a human, is a simple passing.  Nature accepts the dead and continues, as it has done from the beginning of time.  The central image in this poem is not the speaker, whose death we are witnessing, but the fly.  The presence of the fly symbolizes nature and affirms that each death is of equal significance in the eyes of the earth.

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     Emily Dickinson's portrayal of Death in "Because I could not stop for Death" is that of a gentleman caller.  She personifies Death as a guide, leading her on a journey through life,  each passing scene represents a different stage.  "We passed the School, where Children strove At Recess—in the Ring" [lines 9-12] depicts childhood, "We passed the Fields of Gazing Grain—" portrays maturity, and "We passed the Setting Sun—Or rather—He passed Us—" represents the grave.  The ride reflects the natural progression of the speaker's life in an un-threatening manner.  The speaker does not seem to fear Death, ...

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