The incident on the beach

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Amy Lockwood        English Writing Piece        Miss Pinder

English Descriptive Writing Piece.

My friends and I went to the beach. The sun was shinning and the sky was the bluest I had ever seen it. I took my shoes off and felt the soft, warm sand go through my toes. The sand felt like a warm winter’s blanket. The beach was full with families and groups of children (since it was the summer holidays). We found a spot on the beach, just started to relax when out of nowhere came a scream. The screaming getting louder and louder. The woman screaming was crying “Quick someone come and help, a man has been stabbed in the beach shop because of a burglary gone wrong.”

               My friends and I ran over to her and told her to take it easy and calm down. The woman was in a bad state, her mascara running down her face in big black lines. Her face was red and blotchy like as if she hadn’t seen anything like it before. While I ran to the beach shop, my friends comforted the woman.

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                The shop was a mess; a window had been put through. Glass was everywhere; it looked as if icicles had fallen from a roof and smashed. The alarm was going off, people were standing outside the shop door glaring and gossipy, nobody doing anything. What was wrong with these people? Why couldn’t they help? They would want help if they had been stabbed.

                 As I walked in, Bill the shopkeeper was lying on the floor bleeding presently. I had never seen that much blood ...

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