The Procedure - A Dystopian Story

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The Procedure

A mother and her daughter are sitting in front of a seemingly endless life-size digital catalogue of models for The Procedure.

The mother, Sarah, tells her daughter, Rachel, “I think Model Number Eight might suit you better. Most girls your age want to look better. Aren't you excited? Earth to Rachel… What are you looking at?”

Rachel replies, “A picture of you before The Procedure. I think you looked beautiful. Mother, if I didn't want The Procedure, I wouldn't have to have it, would I?”

“What are you talking about?” Sarah condescendingly responds. “It's the most marvellous thing that can happen to a person. Just think, you could look like me, wouldn't that be wonderful! What's so terrible about being beautiful? After all, everybody is.”

Later that day, Rachel is sitting out on the balcony outside her room. Rachel's friend, Marnie, walks out onto the balcony.

“Your mum let me in, and she told me about you. Why don't you want The Procedure? It's not like it hurts or anything. When I had mine, I didn't feel a thing,” says Marnie, in a reassuring tone.

“I know that,” says Rachel, “but I liked you before The Procedure. I want to be unique. Being like everybody, isn't that the same as being nobody?”

Marnie asks, “Where are you are getting these radical ideas from?”

“I used to talk to my dad a lot,” confesses Rachel, “just the two of us, about real things.”

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“So we don't talk about real things?” asks Marnie.

“No, it isn't that,” Rachel says, “but there has to be more to life than our silly conversations, don't you understand?”

After serious concerns by her mother, Rachel is taken to The Procedure Clinic by her mother to talk to a psychologist about Rachel's hesitations.

“So you must be Rachel,” The Psychologist says. “It must be just about time for you to have The Procedure. You are tired of being a monster, aren't you? I can give you The Procedure right away.”

“No doctor, it's not ...

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