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The Real Charlotte

After a close analysis of ‘The Real Charlotte’, I have come to the conclusion that Edith Somerville and Martin Ross maintained a real dislike for their creation, Charlotte Mullan, an attitude they portrayed successfully throughout the novel through their characterisation.  Somerville and Ross’s portrayal of the real charlotte uses a number of methods to convey the highly repellent nature of the novel’s protagonist.  This hatred for Charlotte may have been due to the fact that she is based on a cousin of Edith Somerville, named Emily Herbert, who, by cheating Edith out of an inheritance, gave her the incentive to make a career for herself as a writer.  Several letters have stated that Emily was found in her home, The Point House, lying dead in her bed surrounded by her thirteen cats.  Throughout the novel Charlotte’s love for cats is shown, they are described as her, ‘heart’s love’.  A similar connection may be seen in the unrequited love of both women: Edith was in love with a married attorney, Charlotte with Roddy Lambert.

It is highly likely therefore that Edith took her revenge on Emily by creating Charlotte Mullan, whom most critics view as a truly grotesque fictitious embodiment of the despised relative. Asking any reader to feel sorry for such a character when being fully aware of her scheming ability, her falseness, her ugliness, and her patronizing attitude to her inferiors is difficult, however, in spite of her numerous failings, it is impossible not to respond to her with some degree of sympathy due to her love for Roddy Lambert, an estate agent for the Bruff estate.  As a result of this unrequited love, the reader is forced to feel for Charlotte, recognising that she is capable of expressing some feelings other than evil.  

The heroine of the novel is Charlotte’s much younger cousin, Francie Fitzpatrick, but it is Charlotte with whom the novel is predominantly concerned.  Charlotte’s ugliness is portrayed in the opening chapter, through the authors’ many descriptions of her physical demeanour.  In our first meeting with Charlotte, where she is with her dying aunt, she is portrayed as being a vicious and evil women: she is described as giving the fire a ‘frugal poke’ which immediately suggests her callousness to her aunt’s situation, as well as being indicative of her mercenary and hard-hearted nature.  This initial characterisation makes us aware Charlotte’s evil qualities which are shown time after time in the later events of the novel.  

It is quite obvious to us that Somerville and Ross deliberately present Charlotte’s character as being as unattractive as possible, as on not one occasion in the novel is Charlotte described  as being anything but of a repulsive nature. The first description of Charlotte given to us in the novel is of a ‘woman’s short, thick figure appearing in the doorway’.   Charlotte’s physical appearance is juxtaposed with that of Francie: we read that Charlotte hurried ‘clumsily after the light graceful figure’. Whereas we learn that Francie ‘tossed her long golden plait of hair and gave a defiant skip as she walked’, on the other hand Charlotte is described as ‘taking a hair pin from the ponderous mass of brown hair that was piled on the back of her head’.  Another contrast between Francie and Charlotte is shown when they engage in an argument as the authors tell us of, ‘The fire of the anger smiting on both their faces, lighting on Francie’s cheek with a malign brilliance, and burning ugly purple red on Charlotte’s leathery skin’.  The diction here is highly effective as the use of colours exposed is quite repellent.  Another situation when Somerville and Ross refer to colours in terms of Charlotte’s unattractive physical appearance is when we learn of: ‘Her colour fading from red to dirty yellow’.  One of Edith’s brothers wrote to the two authors, angrily protesting:

“Such a combination of bodily and mental hideosity as Charlotte could never have existed outside of your and Martin’s diseased imaginations”

This comment was one with which the families of the two girls agreed, but, on the other hand, critics such as Hilary Robinson praised the authors on their portrayal of Charlotte Mullan, describing the protagonist as a

Splendidly realised and entirely convincing figure of evil”,

From the opening chapters of the novel we are aware of Francie’s physical appearance as having connections with light, not just with reference to her build but also with regard to her positive qualities as opposed to Charlotte’s negative ones.  ‘Charlotte turned her head to look at the radiant sunlight figure’.  At this point the sympathy I feel for Charlotte cannot hide my recognition of her ugliness, and it is made evident by the blunt tone of the author’s omniscient narration.  The use of animal imagery clearly conveys her creators’ dislike of the protagonist and it is also an attempt by the authors to dehumanise her as the corners of Charlotte’s mouth were said to ‘bubble like that of a snail’, a highly effective image.

The fact that the authors compare Francie and Charlotte like this in their physical appearance shows that they felt a special affection for Francie, and in, Irish Memories, they describe how it was a difficult decision to kill her. Charlotte’s attitude to Francie is one of heartless resentment due to the fact that Francie is younger and prettier than her and Roddy loves her. Charlotte’s evil actions undoubtedly partly stem from the fact that she is jealous of Francie: Charlotte will always be unattractive so, in fact, sympathy is felt for her already.  

Charlotte’s heartiness is feigned, just as the name of her residence, ‘Tally Ho’ belies the character of its owner.  The name is highly ironic given the characteristics of its chief occupant.  ‘Tally Ho’ suggests joviality and light-heartedness while the name Charlotte means ‘womanly’, which is shown to be untrue in her behaviour and authority.  The authorial descriptions of Tally Ho are an anticipation of the fate of those who live there.  The house symbolises Charlotte and it is when she is at home that we are given a glimpse of the real Charlotte.  Charlotte’s appearance is displayed as being one of absolute repulsiveness, and in comparable perspective to this, the exterior of her house is described to the same extent, ‘opposite the hall door the ground rose insight slope thickly covered with evergreens and topped by a lime tree, on whose lower limbs a flock of black turkeys had ranged themselves in sepulchral meditation’.  The house is one of darkness, claustrophobia and has associations with the dead.  As the house is ‘covered with ivy’, it blocks the life from the house.  Having lived in Tally Ho for fifteen years, it is truly Charlotte’s home much to Charlotte’s chagrin but, although originally a hunting lodge, it has suffered from a lack of care and attention.  Charlotte has her sights set on the former manor house – Gurthnamuckla, as more fitting for her position in Lismoyle society so, with Machiavellian tactics, she attempts to evict Julia in order to become its owner.

The disturbing environment of Tally Ho at the time of Charlotte’s aunt’s death is reinforced by the atrocious weather conditions used to mirror the motions of the characters.  We become aware of this through the use of adjectives such as, ‘howling’.  Mrs. Mullan’s death is one at which Charlotte is presented as a cold and callous individual, seen in her full awareness of her aunt’s situation as she says to herself: ‘she’ll not last out the turn of the night , examining her aunt with professional attention’. Charlotte should have tried to make her aunt as comfortable and as peaceful as possible in her last few hours.  We find out’ from her aunt that Charlotte must look after Francie, ‘you mustn’t send her away Charlotte, you promised you’d take care of her, didn’t you Charlotte?’, ‘Yes, Yes’, said Charlotte quickly’.  Charlotte’s tone here is sharp and lacks any degree of compassion for her dying aunt.  Norry ‘hastily put down her mug and scrambled to her feet’, responding instantly to Charlotte’s commands, fearful of incurring Charlotte’s anger. Our negative impressions of Charlotte are here reinforced by the tone of her voice to her inferiors.

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The enthusiasm of Charlotte’s role-playing is shown in the way she reacts to her aunt’s death.  Charlotte feels she has to grieve as Norry is also present.  Norry is a gossip and to have it spread round Lismoyle that Charlotte did not mourn would have an effect on the public’s opinion of her, which, as it stands, is of someone, ‘eccentric, but so kind-hearted and so clear and agreeable’.  It is quite obvious that Charlotte is role-playing as, ‘She plucked a large silk handkerchief from her pocket, and with some hideous preliminary heavings of her shoulders, burst into transports ...

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