They all say the large abandoned bedroom hotel beside the lake is haunted

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The Hotel

They all say the large abandoned  bedroom hotel beside the lake is haunted,”Never Ghosts are not real” which me and Brian claim, “yes it was dark , gloomy and spooky but Ghosts come on seriously” it was once a highly successful business ran by a rich family over 250 years ago,now nobody dares to go near as it is believed that one night the whole family was murdered, and robbed, and the husband and wife of the hotel now haunt it and guard what is rightfully theirs and anyone who enters will be killed and have their souls placed in one of the empty rooms. It is also believed that 6 children about 20 years after the death of the family where playing hide and seek in the hotel and none of them ever returned however after me and Brian did some research , we couldn’t find any records of the death on the children which is why we did not believe the story and which is why we had not changed our opinions on believing in spirits but we was still very curious about why no-one ever goes in.

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So we decide that after dark when everyone was asleep we would sneak out in the cold damp summers rain, pack a bag each and spend the night in the hotel, we brought along a powerful torchlight , 2 sleeping bags a few snacks and a couple of bottles of water.

As we approached the hotel  I felt a blood curdling feeling rush through my body, now I immediately  thought this wasn’t such a good idea so I decide to look at Brian who didn't seem frightened at all, so I decided to act brave and ...

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