Now I can feel the massive engines at the back getting to work trying ever so hard to push the ship with all its passengers along. I can’t believe how big this ship is and I can hear people saying the ship is unsinkable, it s the best ship in the world, maybe the best ship ever. I have an idea. Let’s go right to the front. I’m am now there standing right on the edge arms out, the breeze brushing my cheeks like a soft fury cat and the light summer sun beating down on my face. Then there is a tap on my back, I turn around ready for whatever comes to me. But it is just my mum. She tells me to follow her to our room. We are walking down all these long corridors, with lots of doors and then we can see big oak doors with the words “TITANIC” engraved across it. Then she tells me to close my eyes, it feels so weird walking with no vision, I wonder how blind people do it. Mum then takes my hand and leads me the way. She stops me a bit later. I can hear clicking; I think it is the door opening. Now a different hand takes me, I think it is my dad. I hear his voice saying,
“Now be careful of the step.” I step in and now my dad’s hand takes my hand of my eyes. I can’t see anything too much light from the window. My eyes now adjust to the change in the light and I see the beautiful sunset, with the red clouds and the sea glimmering in the suns reflection. Now I look around to see the huge room we are staying in. I think it is bigger than the whole of the downstairs of my house. I love the living room there is the most magnificent sofa in front of me with the shiniest wooden table. I think even the curtains have more class than the whole of my family. I love this room so much and I haven’t even got onto the bedrooms.
“Now hurry along and get on that dress that I got you for your Birthday.” There is some sort of party for the ship. We walk all the way back to the 2 oak doors. Mum said that behind the doors that is the main hall. As we walk in there are 2 doormen on either side to open the door they do it with magnificent effort and as we walk pass them they wish us a good evening. We sit on our table and there is Jo an old friend of ours. The hall was humongous with a band in the corner with a dance floor in front of them.
Eventually the party has finished. We are now on our way to our room on the other side of the ship. It is like past 11o’clock. There is a big jerk forwards and we all fall to the floor. Now everyone rushes out of the hall to the top deck, like a swarm of mosquitoes to light. We join the crowd and run for our lives. We reach the top deck and catch the sight of an ice-berg slicing through the side of the ship like a sharpened knife through roar skin. But where is Jo? I rush to her room next to ours. She and her whole family are there. I tell them what is happening in a rush. Their bottom jaws just drop in amazement. They all rush out to the top. I run after them but after a wave hits the ship that makes me trip and hit my head.
What is happening I can’t remember what happened how long I out for was, I look at my watch I was passed out for around 5 minutes. What? I can hear the sea. Where is it? Oh my god! There it is rushing up the stairs chasing me. It is like the king of the jungle, a lion, chasing a zebra, the zebra has no chance, and guess what I am the zebra. I can now taste blood to rub in more; it must be coming out of my head, from when I hit it on the wall. I want to stop and see how much blood coming out of my head. I’ll wipe my hand across my head and look at it, it is dripping with blood. Oh no I have been oblivious to the rising water, which is now creeping up my legs. I can feel the icy cold water climbing up from my ankles on its way to my knees. I can now feel the pain. It hurts so badly now I can feel the life being sucked out of me through the pain in my head. All the time this is happening the ships back end has been lifting up so now I am looking straight up at the back of the ship. I am desperately trying to get out and be with my family. The water is now lifting me off the stairs. I can feel the ship slowly edging into the water. The life I dreamed I dreamed of in America is now well out of my clutches, ill be lucky to even get out of this boat alive. It is now basically impossible to get out, I have a seriously bad head injury, the water is rising all the time, I can’t even walk I have to try to float to the top and I feel really dizzy after that blow to the head. I dive down to see whether there is another way out. Then a steel girder from the structure comes tumbling down from the roof and misses me by bare inches. I look up and there is another one falling in almost slow motion right in front of my face, it is too late. My life flashes before my eyes, I see all the times with Nan in the park and all the times at school with my friends. Then the steel girder hits me square in the face and drags me down all the way back to the bottom of the ship, which was the front. My leg is trapped under the girder; I think I have broken my leg. The blow to the head made the injury worse, my head now feel like it has been cracked open. I can see the blood in the water over my head. I’m trying to lift the girder of my leg, I can’t. My head now feels faint, I can’t hold my breath for any longer, I pass out again, but this time will I wake up.