Who Killed Lorna Glamour?

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Matthew Hartley

Who Killed Lorna Glamour?

17-10-2001

It was my first day as a detective. I was very nervous. I had to go to Chicago to meet some people I was supposed to be working with. When I finally reached my destination it was getting late, and the air was seldom as cold as it felt right now. Maybe it was my skin, something was creeping inside me. I entered the old, run down building in which I was to start my new job. There was a quiet, old lady at the reception desk. She had short, curly white hair, and a pink cardigan around her shoulders. Her skin was pale and shown her age clearly. Her teeth and nails had a thick coating of yellow, as a result of constant smoking. She made me sick. She told me that my colleagues would arrive in a moment to have a talk with me about the new job I was to start. I’m so choked in fear I cannot respond, but only gasp.

I sat down on a nearby chair, and waited eagerly. It was old and rotten. All the original padding had come off over the years. I took a quick glance around the room. The walls were tall and made from beautiful polished pine, and hung framed masterpieces. There were extracts from old newspapers framed up on the wall also. I stood up to examine some of them. They were from cases that had made it into the press. One in particular was about a thief. His name was M.J. Samson. He was a sly old character who stole many jewels and precious stones from unaware victims. Another was very difficult to read; the newspaper was old and some of the ink had faded away. The floor was exposed, and revealed were rotten slimy planks. Because of the smoke from the cigarettes, the ceiling had lost all colour and was in desperate need of a recoating. The room had a really eerie feeling, and I felt as if there was a presence with me. As the key turned in the lock, a creaking sound filled the room.

In stepped two men dressed in matt black Armani suits. Both wore polished, black shoes. As they entered the hall, their footsteps echoed throughout the hall. As they approached, I felt weak, but I introduced myself; my voice trembled. I was nervous and apprehensive.

“Hi. I’m T. Blackman. I am new here, and I look forward to working with you both. I believed we spoke on the phone?”

“Yes, that’s right. Would you please follow me?”

And then turned around. I did contemplate having a more enthusiastic introduction. I followed the two men quietly as they led me up the narrow stairway. I clung on to the banister but it was loose. You were risking your life to even attempt climbing these stairs. The fear I felt was tremendous. It was like a demon shutting the light off and having its way with me in motionless darkness. When we reached the top of the stairs I heaved a sigh of relief, feeling much safer. I followed the two detectives down the dark, narrow hallway. Finally we reached what was become my new office. The walk, which in my mind had taken a lifetime, had infact taken 30 something seconds in reality. I stepped into my new room. At last, the two detectives introduced themselves to me,

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“Ok. I am J. Jordison, please refer to me as that you heard and we shall get on fine.”

“And I am C. Taylor. We will be working together a lot, so we will be seeing each other very soon.”

As they left me alone, I looked round my new office, the door was probably the strongest piece of material I had seen in this damned building so far, on it was the number 8Y5 plated on a piece of metal. The room had the smell of cigar smoke; it must’ve been from the previous guy who had used ...

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