With the little bit of consciousness left in her she thought it was better to die like this than spend a lifetime in prison. Little did she know her death was all to be in vain.

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She was lying on the floor with her face next to the gritty, wet pavement and bleeding intensively.  She had cut her veins in the attempt to kill herself, using that fine, gleaming point of the blade that for the last few weeks had been used to shave her legs… its purpose had severely changed, it was now what could be classed as a “suicidal tool”.  As she lay on the ground she became drowsier and began to fall into a coma. As she passed into deep sleep she began to see a kaleidoscope of flickering lights like flames dancing in the wind. She had always known her innocence and who the real killer was but she had no voice against the law. She could not say who he was and why he did it… she was slipping faster and deeper into the coma. Finally, after twenty minutes virtually all her blood was drained from her body and she felt the last pang of the cruel life she led. With the little bit of consciousness left in her she thought it was better to die like this than spend a lifetime in prison. Little did she know her death was all to be in vain.

This scenario had all began because her ex-boyfriend ‘Johnny’, had a very rough time and was very edgy. He had gone to his old friend ‘Dave’s’ house to exercise an old ghost and to get revenge for what he had done. Dave had told Johnny’s family that he had a girlfriend, the family was very strict on the dating matter and disowned him. So Johnny went to his old “friend’s” house and kidnapped him from his house. He then had the idea of taking him to his girlfriend’s house, restraining him to a chair and began talking to Dave about the situation and how “wrong” it was for Dave to open his mouth in such a way, and then he moved on to saying what a “silly” mistake Dave had made…  but it was okay because “even though Johnny cannot forgive you, I’m sure that God MAY be able to find some forgiveness in himself for you.”  What would for Dave now be the most terrifying and prolonged few minutes of what was just the beginning of the end of his life… had just begun. After an hour of the torture the girl came in to her apartment to find her ex-boyfriend hitting her closest friend. She kept telling him to untie him but he wouldn’t listen. She couldn’t figure out what his personal vendetta was…  then all of a sudden he pulled out a berretta GGS9 from nowhere. He was enraged with the hatred of  his friend and without thinking he fired the gun. Five shots to the chest and four to the limbs Dave was dead by the time Johnny had stopped firing.

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Johnny had fled by the time he had realised what he had done. The girl, “Jade” had just finished cleaning the blood up from the wooden laminated flooring. She called 911 in an attempt to have this murder reported. Soon after she rang she the police, she heard the sirens flaring, they pierced the silence like the bullets had sprinted through Dave’s flesh… they had came within ten minutes and immediately thought that jade was the prime suspect. They took her into custody and questioned her like her innocence and ignorance to the matter was her crime. The police ...

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