Write a descriptive piece based on the theme of war or disability or degradation.

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Write a descriptive piece based on the theme of WAR or DISABILITY or DEGRADATION

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The morning had barely arrived by the time Roger, one of the soldiers in camp C2, had awoke. The time was six thirty and the corporals were up early for an unexpected and sudden inspection of their dormitory. One of them was a broad Scouser; the other had a strong Yorkshire accent. He was referred to as “Yorkie” by cheeky recruits because he was so fat.

“Get up you lazy shites. GET UP.” stormed the Major.

“Go away,” said Paul Grison murmuring to himself, but unaware of the corporals’ level of hearing.

“Who said that?” one of the corporals said gently.

Pause.

“I SAID WHO TOLD ME TO GO AWAY?” said the Corporal, raising the decibel level.

Paul was scared stiff, and froze in his bed.

“Right then, you think yer smart arses do ya, eh!” said the Corporal, now venting his anger, “If I don’t get an answer now … it’s twice round block!”

A faint sound was heard coming from someone at the far end of the dorm.

“Sorry, sir. It was me.” said Grison, quietly shivering.

“Do you want ME to go away during battle and leave you lot there so you don’t know where to go and what to do? You’ll be like bloody tourists in foreign country you lot! Right Grison, outside, three times round the block.” said ‘Big Roger’.

Cheers rung around the youngster’s camp.

        This was not a good start to the morning as the battle was approaching, the next day in fact, and Grison’s morale was dented. All day the higher ranked officers were bellowing out instructions, to the point of almost losing their bellowing voices, so that their soldiers are prepared fully and immaculately ready for war. They attempted to increase the Anglo-German hatred by placing pictures of former leaders on dartboards. As the night drew, it was clear that there were anxious youthful soldiers who were worried at the prospect of a battlefield and being naive soldiers. The atmosphere of the dormitory matched that of a doctor’s waiting room, fearing the result of your appointment and with everyone waiting for a comment from someone to break the stale, sullen silence of the room.

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“Eh, lads, what’s gunna happen if one of us gets shot?” said a novice

        Silence surrounded the room. What WOULD they do if one of them was injured and there were no experienced soldiers present?

Before they went to sleep, they all made sure that their kit was clean and ready to save themselves from a pre-battle lecture from the remorseless corporals. The nerves of the soldiers had overwhelmed their personalities and began to act abnormally.

        The night raced on.

        Morning broke with sharpness and the sun rose quickly. The unbearable heat and humidity of the dorm, ...

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