Write the first, second, third and last chapters of a murder mystery set in your school.

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Board: WJEC

Subject: English Language

Task: Write the first, second, third and last chapters of a murder mystery set in your school.

Marking: Sixteen marks available for content, four marks for accuracy.

My Mark: A*, twenty out of twenty.

Adams’ Grammar School Murder Mystery

Chapter 1: The Death Of An Earthworm

        

A new day dawned on Adams’ Grammar School. It was a Tuesday in early March, bright with the promise of Spring. The sunlight glinted off the golden hands of the ancient school clock, momentarily dazzling Mr R. Jones, veteran teacher of history, as he moved busily about the grounds in search of the disappearing textbooks. The school seemed to light up with every footfall, painted with a brush of tranquillity and joy. He passed Mr Cripps’ lesson, in which a stimulating lecture on igneous rocks had been interrupted by visitors. The younger man was now busily engaged in describing the wonders of chemistry to the prospective parents. They were highly impressed, if not a little bemused.

Mr Jones drifted past a window, through which a pair of Sixth Formers could be seen socialising in their common room. One checked his watch, and trotted merrily off to his next lesson. The other retired to the library for study, settling down under the warm, comforting glow of the lights. His studious endeavours would put him in good stead for the test next lesson.

Despite his urgency, the experienced teacher could not help slowing to appreciate the beauty of the day. The gentle warmth and the cool, refreshing breeze invited a kind of joyful lethargy. It was as if comfortable blanket lay over the school, suppressing all ideas of exigency or obligation.  In the staffroom, Mr Brown sat down with his customary cup of tea, and, somewhat tentatively, ate pone. Mrs Howarth, who was an expert on the foods of Native Americans, had advised him that it was a quite delicious meal. Sitting opposite him, Mrs Howarth laughed silently.

At the Matron’s office, Daevid Mike was nestled in a comfortable armchair, drinking a refreshing glass of water and eating a chocolate biscuit. This was doing very little for his sprained ankle, but nonetheless he found himself feeling content. The Matron herself was attending to her flowers, which were thriving in the fine weather. She thought that they were particularly beautiful this year, and dreamt of winning the grand prize at the local flower fair.

Freeing himself of the spell, Mr Jones rushed into the main school. As he climbed the stairs, he waved a greeting to Tom Hall, who was struggling under the weight of a bulging bag filled with history textbooks. As the fifteen year old schoolboy reached the bottom of the staircase, he tripped over the foot of Mr North. The geography teacher was striding purposefully from within S9. Seeing Tom Hall flying through the air, the zip on his bag bursting and textbooks spilling everywhere, he uttered an amiable, “Happy landings, bald eagle,” before striding off to his destination. Mr Jones was able to recover the books on his second circuit through the school, just in time for what would prove to be a most eventful lesson.

***

An airborne rugby boot struck the Adams’ Grammar School sign, sending vibrations into the soil. The earthworm emerged from the darkness of its hole, and began to crawl languidly along the shimmering grass. It was a simple creature, blissful in its ignorance of the world in general. Lacking nothing that it needed, and wanting nothing that it did not need, it was in a state of perfect harmony with the universe. It was not aware of the dreadful fate that was about to befall it.

***

Within the stygian gloom of S8, the second English room, Ronald Collinson wallowed in self-pity. He was not coping well with coursework. The last several weeks, he had been unable to find sleep until two in the morning at the very earliest. Like a ravenous beast, homework consumed the time in which he should have been sleeping. Even within his slumber, it would not leave him alone. His dreams were filled with the insidious drip of ink, the horrifying scrawl that was his handwriting and the thunderous thud of textbooks thrown to the floor. Twice already this school year he had been without sleep all night. Yesterday had been the third. It was a torturous ordeal, to remain without rest for an entire night, hearing the nightingale give way to the owl, and the owl to the lark. Sliding grades, red-rimmed eyes, and a constant feeling of coldness were all signs of his fall from a productive student, eager to learn, to a nervous wreck.

Mr Gibbs, the English teacher, was not making it any easier. As he droned on about the supposedly wondrous effects of placing a second sentence on any description, Ronald found his head nodding against the table. The pain was the only thing keeping him awake. The rest of the class were listening with rapt attention, pausing only to take notes.  You might have heard a pin fall. You could certainly hear the sound of skull meeting wood.

“What are you doing, boy?” growled Mr Gibbs.

"Nothing, sir," replied Ronald, his cheeks colouring with embarrassment.

“That, Collinson, is exactly the point. I want your homework diary on my desk, now!”

        Ronald searched through his bag. As time progressed, his movements became steadily more frantic. His face ashen, he ceased his fruitless endeavours. He felt hollow inside, and his mouth was dry. He gulped audibly, and stuttered unintelligibly for several seconds.

“Spit it out, boy,” roared the enraged English teacher.

 “I’m sorry, sir,” he stammered. “I’ve left it at home.”

        There was a stunned silence. This was not the Ronald Collinson that the pupils had known for the last three years. It was as if he had been replaced. Christopher Iliffe, sitting next to Ronald, remembered tales of daemon changelings replacing children in their cots. In many ways, that story resembled the current situation.

“See me first thing tomorrow,” said Mr. Gibbs. “This is completely unacceptable. Your form tutor will be informed.”

        Justice done, the lesson progressed in the normal manner until Mr. Gibbs asked for the coursework in. It was the final copy, and Ronald had spent all night perfecting it. He knew that it was good. He had poured his soul into it, expending all his energies on that one purpose. In his exhaustion, every word had required the utmost concentration. But he had forged ahead, and ultimately he had prevailed.

        He had also forgotten to print it.

        With increasing panic, he awaited Mr Gibbs. Fighting back tears, he looked up into the face of his doom. With senses honed by long years of dealing with delinquent schoolchildren, he instantly guessed the problem.

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        “Where is your homework, Collinson?” he asked.

        “I don’t have it, sir,” he said, his voice harsh as he suppressed his misery.

        “That’s grand, but it won’t get you marks. Why is it that the rest of the class manages to hand their homework in, and you do not?”

        “I’ve done it, sir, really. I just haven’t printed it.”

        “That’s no excuse, boy. Don’t you understand the importance of this? Going to a Grammar School isn’t a ticket to a GCSE. We can give you the knowledge, but you have to make the effort. You’re a waste of time, Collinson, a ...

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