As long as Asia’s economic growth still goes the way it is going, there will be a mass downfall in the economy. Asia’s financial crisis did not improve the development, and has damaged the progress for the areas infrastructure that could be improving.
Not only will the development of infrastructure help reduce poverty and help the economy in Asia, but it will help the population’s job deficiency.
Building infrastructure for countries helps a larger amount of people to receive a stable income, and helps enlarge the size of towns and cities throughout Asia attempting to make Asia the pinnacle of the developing world reaching for the ‘tallest buildings, highest skyscrapers’ etc.
Increasing the amount of large building in cities will enable more of the population to receive a job and bring income to families, helping the economy at the same time. “The infrastructure assistance program is designed to create new permanent jobs and retain existing jobs, primarily for low- and moderate-income persons. This program encourages new business development, expansions and retentions of businesses located in non-entitlement cities and counties (that shall minimize, to the extent practicable, displacement of existing businesses and jobs in neighborhoods)” - (Infrastructure Assistance) The expansion of buildings and the increased job availability would help alleviate people from unemployment and achieve helps bring attention to the surrounding city that the infrastructure is in. . The permanent jobs that will be enclosed within the buildings being made will help people make a new life for themselves, and minimize the amount of jobs that get taken out of businesses at unsuitable times for the person getting fired.
The increased infrastructure not only helps the people living in the city being developed, but it also increases the tourism of Asia, as every building that gets made now days, is fighting against other surrounding buildings for the most attention and try to develop the tourism destination choices for the buildings given area. “The project was formerly titled “Improving Connectivity and Destination Infrastructure for Sub-regional Tourism Development Project”. The main objective of the Improving Connectivity and Destination Infrastructure for Sub-regional Tourism Development Project is to improve tourist destinations” (South Asia Tourism Infrastructure Development). This evidence by the South Asia Tourism Development project clearly states the reasoning of infrastructure development, which is to increase the amount of tourism in Asia. This reasoning is also related to the development in all other countries, as all countries are aiming for more money, which in turn needs people and their wallets to contribute to the economy and help develop more of the countries infrastructure and environment.
Though the development of infrastructure is helping the tourism in Asia and job availability, it does not assist the natural environment in any way, and also is starting to remove the historical significance of buildings around Asia.
While increased development assists the increase of jobs and also assists the economy, it destroys the natural environment and helps to escalate the amount of building sites in Asia and removes the history of Asia’s buildings as the change of time, changes the perspective of humans today and their perception of what other people want to see.
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Paragraphing and format of the essay is done well, although there is no clear title to the essay. Punctuation, spelling and grammar are all done to a very high level throughout the essay.
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The essay does not have a defined introduction which would help to set the scene for the essay, give the reader a general idea of the focus of the essay and help the essay flow better. The essay focuses very well on development and improvement of the infrastructure the positive effects this will have on the country bot eh economically and socially showing good links between topics. It does not however, give very much information on the negatives although some are mentioned, and this needs to be expanded upon to reach the same level earlier on in the essay. No clear conclusion is reached on whether there are more advantages or disadvantages to tie the essay up.
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A good essay. The candidate shows good depth in thinking and research on the topic and is able to show good links between topics and different impacts. The essay structure needs to be reviewed to include a good introduction and conclusion for a better flow.