How can urban living be sustainable

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Isabelle Beckett-Smith        10PJ        Geography

How can urban living be sustainable?

Urban living means living in a city or town or a densely populated area. A sustainable city is an urban area where residents have a way of life that will last a long time. The environment suffers minimal damage, economic, historic and social factors should also be able to stand the test of time. However one area or building can be sustainable and eco-friendly but the scale is only very small so isn’t a lot of use in the long run.   In cities and towns presently and in the future, we will have a number of issues facing us to make a sustainable city. Some of these issues are; waste disposal, efficient public transport, housing, energy supplies, supporting local businesses and protecting our natural environment.

Waste Disposal

Waste disposal is one of the biggest issues facing us. The only reason it is an issue is because there is too much waste. We are running out of ways to dispose it; that is suitable, cheap and sustainable. At the moment, each person throws away about 450kg of rubbish yearly.  This means that over 111 million tonnes of rubbish end up in landfill sites around the UK. Landfill is the most common method of disposing waste; over 64% of our bin rubbish ends up in a landfill site (excluding industrial, business, and hospital waste).  A landfill is carefully structured to isolate it from the surrounding environment (groundwater etc). To do this the often have a bottom liner, made out of either clay (called a sanitary landfill) or a plastic liner (MSW landfill). Greengairs landfill site in Scotland is the biggest in Britain and Europe with over 750,000 tonnes being dumped each year. However landfills have two major problems being there is too much rubbish and they releases 27% of Britain’s methane emissions.  To try and solve this problem, one of the methods used is incineration. Incineration is the second largest disposal method in the UK.  Incineration is the burning of waste, harmful gases are often given off in this but some modern incinerators uses this wasted energy to convert it to electricity. Cyclamax is planning to build an incinerator in Dronfield however there is a petition going on to stop this because they say it will affect 19 schools and 30,000 people who are in a 2 mile radius from the site.  As you can see, this is not a popular waste disposal method as it can damage health, cause extra traffic in local areas and pollution. There are other methods of waste disposal (anaerobic digestion) however recycling is becoming more and more popular.  Recycling is the collection and subsequent reprocessing of products such as paper, aluminium cans, plastic etc.  Benefits of recycling are; it saves money in production and energy costs, it helps save the environment and it creates new jobs.  Problems of recycling are; they are no efficient ways of recycling, economically it costs more to recycle then to make a brand new product and there are not enough recycling facilities in the UK.  To solve some of these problems, I think they should build more recycling plants, stop producing so much packaging and the government should give grants to companies who use recycled materials.  The easiest and simplest solution is to stop producing so much packaging as that would drastically cut down on the amount of waste in Britain anyway.  

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Public Transport

Public transport is a key factor in any town or city in the world. As more and more people try and commute to work, it is vital to have a good public transport system. A public transport system is transport available to anyone.  However there are often problem with public transport like being too expensive, having long delays, over crowded and run down facilities. Towns and cites always have more than one public transports system. Take London for example there are: trains, the tube, buses, bike lanes, boats and taxi’s. On top of all this there are cars ...

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Punctuation and spelling seems very good overall. There is a lack of paragraphing (okay so each category is separated, but they could be split into several paragraphs each with a different objective). The use of 'in this paragraph' is something every teacher hates to see in an essay, if the introductions were a bit dry some better vocabulary would've been better placed. Furthermore, if this was to read as more of an essay perhaps the subtitles should've been forgone. Remember to use quotation marks when citing a quote.

While the writer goes into a lot of data, several points are dragged out without adding extra detail – one should be careful that one isn't just writing to fill space. Keeping points concise yet detailed is a hard skill to master but important, especially when moving post-GCSE. Lots of statistics were used giving a background to the points made which were great to see.

The writer tackles the question quite well, clearly separating each big problem with sustainability in an urban environment. Points are repeated, and so the essay could have been a lot more concise. It would be good to see some of the main points linked to each other, for example how energy and waste are related (and how energy production creates a lot of waste itself).