Health education - Teenage Obesity, Determinates of health and Risk Factor
10 Health Education
Teenage Obesity
Obesity is a growing problem in Australia, and also globally and is a major issue that can lead to a great deal of health problems.
The definition of Obesity is extremely overweight and unhealthy. Many teenagers of this time are starting to lack exercise and becoming physically unfit and later becoming obese. This is happening not just in Australia but also right round the world. Obesity in teenagers is bad but it will follow the individual into their adult life.
About 30.4 percent of teenagers are overweight, and 15.5% of teens are obese. This means that 45.9% of teens are at risk for developing health problems due to weight. It is important to note that weight gain during the teen years is normal. It is when that weight gain progresses beyond normal limits that teens become at risk for obesity.
There are many causes of Teenage Obesity such as an increased amount of junk food, lack of physical activity and even some genetic factors.
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