Christopher Ball
My Clients P.I.E.S
General – My Clients name is Hillary she is 39 years old she owns her own home, she lives in Castle Bromwich. She was born in Birmingham, England. She has 1 brother and 1 sister this is god because she can always talk to them. She has to sons aged 13 and 15 and her mother and father are still alive. She also has a husband aged 46 called Kevin this is good as she can always talk about his problems to her. Hillary is also a meat eater is good because it is easier for her to get the right amount of nutrients needed. My client has enough money but would like a bit more.

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This is a fair essay that looks at discussing PIES of a client. It could be enhanced by trying to discuss things in a little greater depth. The writer should try to explain what the effects are or the consequences if they have negative effects. ***