The epidemic of fast food and its effect on the health of Americans.

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Of Epidemic Proportions    

        

        Of Epidemic Proportions

        Theo Hall

        Instructor: Joanne Cohn

        ENG 1101 College Writing

        CNM

        July 2, 2012

Thesis Statement: The rise of fast food has helped contribute to obesity on becoming one of the leading causes of preventable death in America.

  1. Introduction
  2. History/Background/Purpose
  1. What
  2. When
  3. How
  1. Mass Production
  1. Effects
  2. Risks
  1. Nutrition
  1. Fats
  2. Sodium
  3. Content
  1. Health Problems
  1. Statistics
  2. Obesity
  3. Psychological Effects
  1. Conclusion      

                                 

        

        

         

   The concept of fast food has made a definite lasting impact on the American consumer and the American culture. Many Americans have made fast food a must in their daily lives. On average, one in four Americans visit a fast food restaurant every day. Along with that, cars, convenience, and poor exercise has helped contribute to what the World Health Organization is now calling an epidemic.

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           It is said that the first fast food chain to have started it all was white castle. White Castle was founded in 1921 and played an important role in the development of fast food. During the time it was founded, many people thought hamburgers came from spoiled meat and slaughterhouse scraps. White Castle helped change the public opinion and gave hamburger meat a better reputation nationwide. McDonalds was also a notable key contributor in popularizing the hamburger to the point where it is today McDonalds wanted to take advantage of the rising popularity of cars ...

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This work aimed to discuss the role of fast food in the causing obesity in the USA. There were many good points made, but there was a distinct lack of evidence to support them. When referring to ?research? it is important for the writer to make clear which research specifically is being referred to. It is still a little unclear as to how exactly fast food has contributed to obesity in the USA. The writer mentions the convenience and the things inside the food that make it so tasty, but has not yet clearly made the link between this and obesity levels. ?Connect the dots?, so the reader is not left uncertain of the argument. Spelling and grammar were good, as was the writing style. 3/5