Task 10 Omid Ashrafi
Unit 4
Legal and corporate issues
The growth of e-commerce has enabled M&S to involve and expand their business from their stores to the world of internet. Marks and Spencer is increasingly using the internet for electronic commerce, selling goods to consumers and also offer a range of information about the available products and services. However selling and offering information on the internet brings with it a list of legal and corporate issues. These issues are designed in order to protect the customers from fraud of misuse of personal data and also laws to consider disabled consumers who may be using the internet site, therefore will require special features. M&S corporate identity, including the corporate logo design and the company corporate identity and branding is the most important information that this company can convey to its customers, therefore specific consideration are designed in regard of protecting the companies identity.
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Quality of writing
The report states within their opening paragraph the term e-Commerce, and there mention it stands for 'electronic commerce'. However this isn't very clear, as this isn't within the same sentence, and could potentially mislead the examiner. The student has done the work, it just needs to be presented in a suitable way. There's a few spelling mistakes within the report, such as 'puts down a serious of rules', this should state 'puts down a series of rules'. The term 'DTI' isn't explained within the report, and it's vital that all technical terms are explained within any report. This is due to that the examiner will need to understand what the report is saying, and the examiner may not have an in-depth knowledge of IT.
Level of analysis
The report uses the word 'corporate', although doesn't explain what there mean by this. I believe that if a person uses this word, this is their opinion and thus this needs to be explained. For example the report could include 'M&S's logo is quite corporate, due to the simplistic concept of the logo. There is a simple vibrant green and black text, and this looks professional, which makes this have a corporate feel to the website'.
Response to question
In summary, the report does mention a number of laws that M&S has to take into account. However the report is lacking a detailed view of how these different aspects will be implemented within the website. The report doesn't mention what M&S will have to do, to ensure these are followed. The section 'Data Protection Considerations' is quite weak. The report should state the eight different principles of the regulation, including a little information on why each of these principles are required of website owners. On the flip side, the section on 'terms and conditions' gives the examiner a detailed description of the reason to why M&S would need to implemented this legal requirement.