French Oral. - Introducing Myself

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J’mappelle Mike Bryant, J’ai quatorze ans et J’habite a Aylebury dans le Buckinghamshire. Mon Anniversaire c’est le cinq juillet. Je suis Anglais mais je habitais en Allemagne pendant deux ans.

        Je suis tout grand et j’ai un grand nez, et les yeux bruns, et de grandes oreilles. J’ai les cheveux blonds et mi-longs.

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        Je suis tres drole, courageux, tres fort, honnete et mur; mais je suis un peu agressif aussi je suis tres rebelled. Enfin, je suis independent, c’est tres important pour moi.

        J’ecoute beaucoup la musique, j’adore le punk rock et le hard rock. Le weekend dernier, je suis alle a un grand concert a Londres avec mes amis, c’etait stupefiant!

        Le weekend prochain j’irai beaucoup a un concert mai cest tres grand et cest a Milton Keynes.

        J’ai un frere, il s’appelle Dominic et il a dix ans. Il est tres difficile mais il est amusant.

        Mon meilleur ...

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This is a 3 star piece of work. It has some variety of sentence structures, some good adjectives, and 4 different tenses (some very briefly.) Some conjunctions are used to link sentences together. However there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer could add more opinions and reasons, different conjunctions to link sentences together, and more details about hobbies, family etc. Also, adding more detail about the concert in the past and future tenses would make the speaking exam longer and prove to the examiner that the candidate has a good understanding of French grammar. It needs to be between 4 and 6 minutes long.