Mein Traumberuf. Ich mchte als Geschftsfrau arbeiten, aber man einen langen Arbeitstag hat.
Mein Traumberuf
Ich möchte als Geschäftsfrau arbeiten, aber man einen langen Arbeitstag hat.
Das wäre nicht interessant. Deshalb mein idealer Beruf ist es, Journalistin zu
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This is a 3 star piece of work. The writer has written some good German and has tried to use complex sentence structures such as 'wenn' clauses, subordinating conjunctions, and a variety of different tenses. A lot of these are successful. Some topic-specific vocabulary has been used and opinions and reasons have been given. Generally there is quite a lot of information expressed here. In order to improve this piece of writing, the writer needs to check work carefully. There are some mistakes with conjunctions, which could be avoided if the rules are checked in the grammar section of a text book. Also, the writer could use a greater variety of complex structures, such as relative clauses, and different verb types, such as separable and reflexive verbs.