Keerthy Rajasekharan GCSE French Oral Topics Au collège
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Mon collège s’appelle l’école Britannique de Bahreïn et il se trouve au centre ville, Manama. C’est une école mixte et fondée en 1994. Il y a deux bâtiments, qui sont un peu vieux et plutôt moche. Mon collège n’est pas grand et donc il n’y a que quarante professeurs et cinq cent élèves.
Nous suivons le system britannique. Chaque cours dure quarante minutes, avec une pause à onze heures moins dix. Il faut porter un uniforme scolaire, que j’aime pour de nombreuses raisons, mais nous n’avons pas le droit de porter de bijoux ou de maquillage.
Il y a beaucoup de difficultés dans le système scolaire. Quelquefois, je suis stressée car il y a trop de devoirs. Cependant, je m’amuse aussi, parce que pendant la récréation, je bavarde avec mes amis ou je joue au foot.
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Quality of writing
The standard of French in this piece is very high. The candidate has used a range of tense and different grammatical features effectively and appropriately. She has also used the subjunctive correctly, « Bien qu’il y ait », which is excellent and above the standard required for a GCSE piece of work.
Level of analysis
The level of analysis here is of a standard appropriate for a high level oral candidate. To each of the questions the candidate has given a very full and detailed answer, explaining the various aspects of life at a British school in Bahrain. She has explained how her school follows the British system, her school uniform, her daily routine and her plans for the future, and throughout has been able to offer developed opinions on each of these, as well as showing an awareness of both sides of the debate regarding school uniform. Overall it is an excellent piece of work.
Response to question
This piece of work follows the structure of a series of questions and answers and is of a very high standard. The candidate has responded very well and in great detail to each of the questions, and has put to use a broad range of expressions and grammatical features in giving her answers.