Dear Sir, I have been looking closely at the proposed plans for the year eleven prom. There are a few points that I would like to put forward and some strongly felt issues of many other pupils in year eleven

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Michael Webb                                                       14th Jan 2006

Prom Letter – Coursework

        20 Llwynfedw Gardens

Birchgrove

Cardiff

CF14 4NX

25 Valeymore Road,

Witchurch,

Cardiff,

CF14 5NQ

14th January 2006

Dear Sir,

        I have been looking closely at the proposed plans for the year eleven prom. There are a few points that I would like to put forward and some strongly felt issues of many other pupils in year eleven.

        My main concerns include the venue of the prom, the music, date and time.

        Firstly I would like to say that I admire the fact that you have taken on this huge project, especially as there so many different varieties of young people coming to the prom.

        Although I acknowledge it is extremely hard to make an event like this to happen, I would appreciate it if you would take some time to look at my ideas.

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        The choice of venue is probably the most important decision to be made. I believe the current proposal may not include the best place to hold it. My main reason being, that it is not easy to get to for all pupils, as it is not a very central part of Cardiff. I would therefore propose that the prom be held at a more easily accessible venue, for example the Angel Hotel in Cardiff City Centre.

        Secondly, I believe that the music is one of the most important factors of how smoothly the prom will go. I would propose that ...

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