Explain how determinism relates to the biological perspective
Determinism is an important aspect in the biological perspective. This perspective focuses on a biological basis in explaining behaviour. The key element of hormones, neurotransmitters, genes and brain structures suggests how behaviour is influenced. Consequently, this perspective is deterministic, due to the fact that it emphasise that some behaviours may be biologically determined. Hence, it suggests that humans may have limited control and free will is determining their behaviours. Several empirical studies have outlined the deterministic aspects in this perspective. However, it may be reductionist to only focus on biological elements to explain complex human behaviours because there is evidence that suggests that cognitive and behavioural factors can also play an important role in determining behaviour.
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The Quality of Written Communication here is very good. All signs indicate a candidate who is proficient and writes with a good level of understanding of a wide variety of psychological terminology. This shows the examiner a comfortability with the language of the professionals and is a great way of making your essay sound more confident. From an English perspective, there is no cause for concern with regards to spelling, grammar or punctuation.
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The Level of Analysis is prescriptive and may comes across regimented, but this really is the best way to convey all the necessary information the question requires. The discussion about the empirical evidence for and against determinism in the biological approach is balanced and makes a good argument that uses it's psychological studies well. As stated earlier, some extra background to some of the studies could be useful, and the links to determinism must be made very clear, as there are marks for establishing the relevance of studies in accordance with the question. For example, Chomsky's case study on "Genie" could also be analysed for cognitive individual differences, and so them this study would have to be linked in a different way to a different aspect of psychology.
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This is an excellent essay. It is very succinct and to-the-point, very rarely writing anything that does not directly score marks/is unrelated to the question. The candidate provides a good indication of their understanding of both determinism, the biological approach, and the role of determinism in explaining behaviour through biological means. The evaluation shown is balanced and provide two studies supporting of the presence of determinism in biological studies and two that prove that biology does not 100% determine behaviour. A little more clarity could be useful here, as many of the studies are outlined in brief and those unfamiliar with them may not fully understand the theories behind them, such as in McGuffin's study, where it should be made clear the use of a sample of monozygotic twins, rather than dizygotic or a mixture of both.